fic | From What I've Tasted of Desire | Dominic/DeWitt

[oltha_heri]

From What I’ve Tasted Of Desire
Dominic/DeWitt
spoilers for Epitaph One
PG-13, 850 words
Many thanks to irony_rocks for the beta.
Title from Frost's "Fire and Ice."

Comments

[otahyoni]

Mmm. Very, very nice. Love the parentheticals and how they're a continuation of the, uh, non-parentheticals.

A lovely vignette.

[oltha_heri]

Thank you. I'm glad the non-linear-ness worked for you. :)

[nallain]

Neat :) Dom is so nicely destroyed, it`s so obvious he`d been loyal all the time, and, I don`t know, I guess that kind of bugs him :D Anyway, I like the way you write, really, a lot. I myself am still struggling with Dom`s POV, this was a valuable piece of inspiration :)

[oltha_heri]

I have a lot of half finished D/D fics on my HD and all of them are from Adelle's POV and I was surprised when this came out in Dom's POV, so I'm ridiculously flattered you found inspiration in it. Thank for your comments. :)

[oltha_heri]

Thank you darling. I love non-linear so much and I'm always so afraid I'm gonna screw it up. :D And you helped me a lot, so again, thanks.

[derevko_child]

I find this sad and sweet and the non-linear narration works very well.

The question takes him aback. He thought it was implicit, he thought she knew. With you, he thinks. Instead he finds her hand between their bodies and traps her fingers with his.

This. <3

[oltha_heri]

Thank you! I'm so scared of writing their sweetness (which I'm totally convinced exists) so I'm happy you liked it.

[morgan72uk]

So beautifully muddled up - love the way it unravels. I was just reading Fire & Ice the other day and thinking how perfect it is for Dollhouse and D&D in particular.

[oltha_heri]

Thank you.