Life Fic: Step 4 of A Work In Progress (finally)

[oltha_heri]

I have so much other fic I need to finish right now (and it doesn't help that my muse is deciding I want to write Alesha/James (Law and Order: UK not Martha and Lee but Martha and hot guy who was gay in The State Within) and Sarah/Derek (Sarah Connor Chronicles)), but I felt really guilty for not finishing this.

Series: A Work In Progress. Or:

Comments

[citosol]

You know I'm loving your fic, don't you?
Oh yes, even if it isn't a Tideese fic! LOL

I cannot wait for the next (and I hope NOT the last) chapter! Especially if you are going to write down Charlie and Dani having sex on *their* couch! ;D

[oltha_heri]

Maybe I'm secretly plotting to bring you back over to Creese. *shifty eyes*

I really want to write smut for them, but I'm not sure if I know how to do it for these two. Anyway I hope even without smut I continue to please you. :D

[citosol]

LOL!
But You know, I kinda *am* still Creese, deep inside...only I cannot write them till Dani is with Tidwell...
But I DO live Tideese, of course! Hmm...it's a little bit intricate, I know.

Oh, I have a news about "when" we will know is life is going to be renewed or not: go here http://citosol.livejournal.com/29702.html

...it's a long story but I'm sure he's the real Donal Logue
:)

And don't worry, I'm sure I'll love your story as you planned it!

[oltha_heri]

You have no idea how much I love that you like that line because I had to rework it several times, and I'm glad the effort paid off.

Thank you for reading.

[impish_dragon]

Great update. I like the idea of them furniture shopping and her approaching it like she does an interrogation. Looking forward to more. More being several chapters of course. *snicker*

[oltha_heri]

Thank you.

[grimorie]

Furniture shopping! I love moments like these! I believe penknife would call this a curtainfic!:D And I love curtain fics done right, which this is. I love that its... its domestic and yet it's not. Because of how its done and who they are.

It's not a wonder I love this sentence: he realized that she was inspecting furniture for his house like she read each of their suspects in an interrogation.
!

(BTW, when you're done, poke me or jab me with a stick so I can add this in the pers_pineapple newsletter!)

[oltha_heri]

I'm glad I kept them in character. And thank you for the link, I've seen the idea around but I never knew it actually had a trope. I am so glad people are liking that sentence 'cause I did actually have to work it, and that it paid off is fantastic.

(I will. I'm a complete comment whore and will pimp myself anywhere. :) )

[ikeepfishinmytv]

:D
Yummy

[oltha_heri]

Thanks.