Ides of March Fic Challenge- Being Human

Mar 15, 2008 08:49

Title: I Don't Leave You Alone
AuthorArtist: omarandjohnny, with magnificent contributions by lilithilien ;)
Fandom/Pairing/Prompt: Being Human, George/Mitchell, prompt #016- Firsts
Rating: R
Summary: George isn't by himself tonight...Takes place before the pilot. Title is from VAST's Touched.
Disclaimer: I own nothing, I claim nothing, I IZ NOTHING. Merely a fan, that's ( Read more... )

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noorie March 15 2008, 22:41:17 UTC
mmm, i don't see them as a couple before the pilot, but still a lovely read :) i esp. liked this paragraph:
It's not a threat, this thing. The creature can sense no real fear, but a taste of caution still salts the air. The only smell that it truly picks up is the rotting. A whiff of sweetness before the overwhelming sour. Like the purring, the smell comes from deep inside. It knows that if the dead thing is ripped open, that smell would pour out like water. The wolf could leap up and swipe one of those spindly legs, snatch and snap it right off. It almost wants to, needs to, make the leap. If only for curiosity's sake.

also props to cyd for the beta skillz, sorely neglected in the BH fics i've read so far (not that there have been that many...)

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omarandjohnny March 16 2008, 03:18:26 UTC
Awes, thank you darling!!! ::cuddles your icon::

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elliannna March 16 2008, 11:20:07 UTC
Really beautifully written, the wolf's thoughts came across so well. And i love the idea of Mitchell wanting to watch and see George in his other form. Great fic

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omarandjohnny March 16 2008, 12:25:52 UTC
Awes, thank you so much for reading!

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omarandjohnny March 16 2008, 12:26:13 UTC
Thankies ;)

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violetknights March 16 2008, 13:10:29 UTC
very tender and beautiful, I really like the way you switch between George's wolf voice and his man voice.

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omarandjohnny March 16 2008, 13:59:21 UTC
Thank you very much!

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darkenglishrose March 16 2008, 13:33:05 UTC
Oooh that was just lovely ^^ A really nice read, thank you XD

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omarandjohnny March 16 2008, 13:59:33 UTC
No, thank you for reading! :)

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