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Fic: Sweet, Sweet Revenge

May 21, 2009 21:37

So I forgot I had written this one (most likely done whilst procrastinating a few weeks back) so I thought I may as well sneak on here and post it and be done with it. I don't write stuff like this often, so it was quite a challenge =). Well, here goes:

Title: Sweet, Sweet Revenge
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: NC-17 (to be safe)
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sergio ramos, fernando torres, fic

Comments 18

adorerdollylux May 21 2009, 13:15:19 UTC

ohgoddd i hate them being so far apart. it's so painful but can lead to such sexy, sexy results. mmm. :)

this was beautifully written and swept me away. the descriptions were delicious!

ombu_tree May 26 2009, 10:02:42 UTC

Thank you for reading and your compliments. Hahah, I agree. It is sad that they are split up, but now the season's over, they can catch up and be merry! =)

casi_casi May 21 2009, 13:34:25 UTC

Oh god. That was so painful - not because it was written anything less than beautifully, but just the thought of Fernando giving in and putting Daniel through that... And at the same time, you just want Fernando to be with Sergio, because Sergio clearly needs him so much. The ending came as such a relief, honestly. Fernando is such a darling in this, using what little control he has over the situation to act with integrity.
Really enjoyed this; I totally got caught up in it!

ombu_tree May 26 2009, 10:11:07 UTC

Aw, thank you!

That's exactly how I felt when it was suggested I write this version. And in the end I couldn't make Fernando be that mean. I just couldn't. I do love Fernando, I can't be making him be so heartless now, can I? =P

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ombu_tree May 26 2009, 10:12:26 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Hee, yes. Sergio is quite fiesty and mischievous. And look at Nando's face! Can you imagine him being mean? No? Yeah. ^_^

ikkinn May 21 2009, 18:08:20 UTC

They are so perfect <3 I'm glad Fernando didn't go through with Sergio's plan, because it's cruel... although I understand Sergio's jealousy. It's not easy being so far apart :(

ombu_tree May 26 2009, 10:13:31 UTC

Yeah, I agree. I admire people who can work the long distance relationship. It must be tough.

I'm glad you liked them two in my fic, and thank you for dropping a comment =)

inesdelsol May 21 2009, 18:13:27 UTC

mmmmmmmm yummy ;-) I like it. VEEEEEEEERY much ;-)

ombu_tree May 26 2009, 10:14:02 UTC

Thank you! Those two Spaniards are very delectable, *nods*

=D

inesdelsol May 26 2009, 10:28:35 UTC

very delectable... yes. And damn hot as Andalucia ;-) May I say
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