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Fic: The Dangers of Eavesdropping

Feb 21, 2010 00:59

I'm meant to be doing my case reports but instead have spent all day writing this fic. It was a nice change as I haven't been fic writing for ages and I did miss it, a lot. I'm so out of the loop in terms of details as to what's happening now so I couldn't use a match to base my fic on, so here's my attempt at a general fic. It's inspired by ( Read more... )

daniel agger, javier mascherano, pepe reina, fic, steven gerrard, maxi rodríguez, sergio ramos, martin škrtel, fernando torres, xabi alonso, jamie carragher

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txorakeriak February 22 2010, 17:02:07 UTC

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! OMG, and all the time I was wondering what the hell Martin could have wanted that could be innocent! XDDDDDDD I never would have thought of this. Poor Masche. XDD I suppose this is completely unlike everything he expected when he asked Maxi that question. I loved how the whole thing started to be a little pebble and then turned into a HUGE avalanche in the end, unstoppable. XDDDDDD This is amazingly written, perfectly constructed, and the grip you have on your characters is just wonderful. What a hilarious fic! XD

(There are some tiny mistakes that need fixing, want me to point them out?)

*adds to memories*

ombu_tree February 23 2010, 08:42:39 UTC

Hee! I'm glad you found it funny! =) hehee. I'm also glad you caught on early that everything was all going to be innocent. hehe. I guess that's the type of fics I write, eh? lol. But yeah, poor Masch indeed. I feel slightly bad for knocking him around like that, but hey. He's just a figment of my imagination, no?

Thanks for all your lovely comments... and definintely, point out the mistakes! YOu don't have to ask, just do it! I'm sorry for making them, it's probably because I was in a bit of a rush to get the fic off my hands (I need to do uni work and whilst the fic wasn't posted I would still be fiddling with it, which isn't so good for me and also not so good for the fic coz it might be less riddled with mistakes had I taken the time to really comb out the mistakes. SO for that, my apologies!) but yeah, point them out and I'll fix them! =)

m0nkeysbrains February 23 2010, 02:50:21 UTC

ahahahah. delightfully silly. i'm glad you're back. XD

ombu_tree February 23 2010, 08:43:34 UTC

Hee, thank you for reading and leaving a message and also, very muchly for the welcome back =)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was feeling quite silly that day. heh!

alejaboo April 5 2010, 14:27:36 UTC

omg!
they're so hilarious