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Fic: A Week of Losses

Mar 12, 2010 19:28

Title: A Week of Losses
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres. Mention of Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos.
Rating: PG 13
Disclaimer: Any fictitious relationships described within is true in the land of imagination only.
Summary: The last two defeats bring out the worst in some players.
Word Count: 2794
Feedback: Would be greatly appreciated! Good/ ( Read more... )

daniel agger, sergio ramos, Álvaro arbeloa, xabi alonso, fernando torres, fic, iker casillas

Comments 16

iseijin_chan March 12 2010, 09:41:13 UTC

Gorgeously written. I could really feel the frustration Xabi, Fernando and Danny felt. Ah Nando, don't take out your frustrations on Danny. ):

Now if Fernando would really cut his hair...

ombu_tree March 15 2010, 00:12:29 UTC

Thank you. It's a frustrating time for anyone who supports Liverpool, I guess. =( Let's hope our fortunes change for the better soon. =S

robbie96 March 12 2010, 11:03:24 UTC

squee!!!

Oh so well written....I wouldn't be surprised if our number nine comes out against Pompey with a buzz cut!

or bald!

rofl.... thank you, I needed that :)

ombu_tree March 15 2010, 00:14:00 UTC

Why, thank you =). I'm glad you liked it.

Oh god... please not! I would hate to see Nando with a buzz cut or bald! I looove him with hair. Long hair!

I hope the next post match fic will be happier... we do desperately need the points *sigh*

tetila March 12 2010, 12:54:48 UTC

*wibble* Sad :(
I love the idea and oh boys - how I want to hug you both. Very well written. So thanks for sharing!

btw,
And maybe he did need to cut his hair. hahaha :D I think his hair looks really healthy right now.

ombu_tree March 15 2010, 00:16:13 UTC

=( I'm sorry! *sniffle*. I want to hug our whole team. They all look so sad and defeated. *sigh*.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Regarding Nando's hair.... hehehe, I agree, his hair's not too bad now. It was, but it's grown out a bit now and it's starting to look okay. But its more to do with his superstition about his hair, no? I hope he scores soon, he really needs it. =S

sgh15 March 12 2010, 17:56:57 UTC

Oh Sergio is too cruel to Nando, but he wants to help.It was really tough week.
Thank you hun this was sad but beautiful.
This certainly needs to be continued.

ombu_tree March 15 2010, 00:19:15 UTC

Yeah, I don't think Sergio wants to be cruel, he just wants Nando back, and the silly boy can't think of any other way of doing so. *shakes head* Ah, yeah. It's not been one of the best weeks eh, but considering our season, it's probably not one of the worst either. *sigh*

Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. I appreciate being able to see what you thought of it. =)

Ah, sequels. I am so terrible at them. But I think in this case, depending on how our next match goes, perhaps that is needed?

sgh15 March 15 2010, 15:52:23 UTC

yeah we need something happy:)

ombu_tree March 19 2010, 10:53:33 UTC

something happy =D yes! Is done, if you want to whittle away some time... =P

This week has been a good week, in drastic contrast to last week! Let's hope the confidence continues to the end of the season! WE sure need it!

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mandie_aka March 12 2010, 19:25:00 UTC

Agghhh...beautifully written but the analysis is a teeny bit too accurate for comfort! I'm depressed all over again now.
It's not been a good week.

ombu_tree March 15 2010, 00:20:45 UTC

Thank you for your comment. I'm sorry about the analysis. I guess we don't want to acknowledge the fact that we're really underperforming this season. =(

But hopefully we can take that in our stride nad improve! we need to revive that fighting spirit. Let's hope Monday's match can make us happier. *crosses fingers*