Fic: All is Not Lost

[ombu_tree]

Title: All is Not Lost
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Other Characters: Martin Škrtel, Maxi Rodríguez
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Any fictitious relationships described within is true in the land of imagination only.
Summary: After the disappointing result against United, some players just need a bit of time to cool off.
A/Ns: I know Martin is

Comments

[rayziz]

God, the end reminds me of the time last season when Dan was rumored about leaving. The fics were so heart breaking then. As was this, but not so much since Fernando will definitely change his mind after reading pepe's, dan's and mascher's interviews. I'm being optimistic here.

The third paragraph in the last part was ..incredible. The descriptions were amazing. I can't get enough of it. I've read it a few times already.

I love how Fernando's so understanding of Dan's attitude. How he just leaves him at the right moment, before something more hurtful is thrown about(not that what Dan said wasn't hurtful enough, but you know). They fit so perfectly.
I love the odd characters who come out to give Dan some wise advise. First it was Finns, and now Skrtel. The boy just needs a bit of guidance.

I love it. All of it. Such a nice thing to wake up to :)

[ombu_tree]

Wow, thanks for your amazing feedback! I really do appreciate it a lot. =)

haha, I remember those days when almost everyone was churning out angsty, sad fics. Ah, I can't say I'm sorry to see them go. But I think I'm with you on this one - I don't think (or at least I'm hoping with all my might) that Fernando isn't really going to leave. How can he, after all the support from the rest of the squad. Having said that, I guess we should keep in mind that Xabi did mention that he would like to stay (which turned into I don't mind staying which turned into I'm leaving...) hmmm. Argh. Sorry, let's try to be optimistic. yes.

Aw, I'm glad you liked that paragraph. Writing those scenes don't come easy to me, so I'm glad you didn't think it sounded odd. =S

I do love Dan with Fernando but I guess it's because I love Danny so much, I make everyone else love him too. haha.

Thanks again for your comment. It was nice to wake up to, too. =)

[tetila]

This was wonderfully written. You portrayed their disappointment and anger really good. I love the appearance of Martin and Maxi, makes more 'real'.
The end is both lovely and kinda angsty. Fernando, please stay

This is fantastic, thanks for sharing ♥

[ombu_tree]

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you found it "real" and good.

I'm definitely thinking Nando should stay too... I think he will. Gah, I can't even begin to think about Liverpool with no Nando. Odd, since we haven't had him for long. *shrugs*

[sophiamoon]

How lovely this is. :-)

[ombu_tree]

Thank you for your feedback =). I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[katiebooth1983]

Im resisting the urge to have a full on football rant. I know how Dan feels lol.

This was great, i could really feel Dans anger throughout, i like the way you wrote Martin too. Grreat stuff!

[ombu_tree]

Oh, you shouldn't resist it! I would love for you to rant about football! =)

THanks so much for your lovely piece of feedback. I always enjoy reading what people liked or not liked from my writing. So thanks heaps. =D

p.s. I think your icon's pic was like...one of the most serendipitous photos ever. XD

[ombu_tree]

Oh my.! You are amazing. Words can't describe how awesome you are for all this feedback! =) Thank you! =D

[ombu_tree]

*sends Martin over telepathically*. Received him yet? ;P

By the way, what do you mean I'm sneaky? =P I'm not sneaky at all. And yes. I get what you mean even though it did sound a bit odd at first, lol! XD

I guess when the debts and everything are made more known to public, I can understnad the more urgent need for getting a bigger stadium. I'm still scared about losing the vibe of Anfield event though logic tells me that it shouldn't make a difference coz it's the people in the stadium that brings the vibe, but yes. =S