Fic: See-sawing

[ombu_tree]

Title: See-sawing
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Any fictitious relationships described within is true in the land of imagination only.
Summary: What is wrong and what is right? Who’s to say in the game of love.
A/Ns: Written from prompts kindly given by drbillbongo and tetila a long time ago when I had time to take prompts (cough

Comments

[avisionryofclr]

hehehkjkj the ending did it for me, such a contrast to their mental turmoil with each other. :)

[ombu_tree]

heee, yeah. I hopeit wasn't too abrupt a change though. =S I only finalised the ending after a putting it down for a long time so yeah. But I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to leave me some feedback. =)

[m0nkeysbrains]

mmm. wow. i love the way their relationship was described throughout, like the passion that was kind of both love and hatred. just...beautifully written, i can't even tell you. so nice to read. :)

[ombu_tree]

Yeah, I guess whenever yuo're in a relationship that you feel guilty in, these mixed feelings would crop up. Glad you enjoyed reading it! Thank you so much for your comment and your compliments!

[narya86]

Wow, I really like this. Especially the feeling of realism, how they're so torn between each other and their lives with their families etc. It feels as difficult reading as it probably would be to live through it. But the kiss at the end was sooo sweet. :D

[ombu_tree]

Thank you for your comment and feedback. I agree about living it being difficult. I guess there's always a guilt that follows you when you do something like this, no matter how much you love everyone involved. It was very interesting to explore that part of the relationship so I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

[spring_mar]

i so love it!!!
<333!

and the end is just way to cute for words! <3

[ombu_tree]

Thank you! =)

I'm glad you liked it. I was a tad worried about the ending but I guess I shouldn't have been ;P hhee. THanks again for your comment.