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Fic: Last Play

May 05, 2010 20:54

Title: Last Play
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres, Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Any fictitious relationships described within is true in the land of imagination only.
Summary: Surrounds the Liv- Chelsea match, our less than outstanding season.
A/Ns: I can’t seem to stay away from the transfer rumours - sorry! May ( Read more... )

daniel agger, post-match, xabi alonso, fernando torres, fic, steven gerrard

Comments 9

parparheaven May 5 2010, 11:18:49 UTC

*hugs* this was such an angsty season for you, and this fic pretty much summed it all up. It's absolutely great, filled with emotions and intensity and it really moved me.

Thank you for sharing <3

ombu_tree May 13 2010, 10:00:30 UTC

Hello, sorry for the late reply, but thank you so much for your comment and feedback. It means a lot that you identified with it.

It has been a very angsty season for me/Liverpool indeed... and yeah. *sniff*. I hope next season will be better. One can only hope.

nanousblues May 5 2010, 11:32:00 UTC

Heartbreaking. Beautifully written.

ombu_tree May 13 2010, 10:00:57 UTC

Thank you for your compliment and for reading. I appreciate it.

katiebooth1983 May 5 2010, 11:48:26 UTC

I love the locker room scene, could picture it so clearly, kinda strange Dan being the calm one, he often looks so angry ( ... )

ombu_tree May 13 2010, 10:09:55 UTC

Thank you for your wonderfully detailed feedback. I do love hearing your views and I'm sorry that you had to stop 'waffling' because of work. Football discussion is always interesting, so feel free to waffle all you like ( ... )

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ombu_tree May 13 2010, 10:13:50 UTC

Ahahhaa, you and I both. =S. Not that I've been following it enough, but I've been killed post-match-ly. If you get me. *am not making sense*.

This season has been so emotionally draining for me, I'm running out of different ways to portray the same feelings @_@. sigh. I do know what you're talking about, because I'm actually very much like Nando in that I like to be in denial whilst knowing full well the extent of whatever problem is in front of me. It's silly but I do it nad I just don't want to really face up to the facts even when I already know it? If that makes sense. ahhaha. We're not being very coherent, are we?

Don't apologise! I am very happy you stopped by to leave a comment despite being short on time =D And after all, I am horribly behind in all of YOUR fics! I see you've written a few more since I last logged in, (the Addy fic mountain continues to grow taller and taller, ahahah! I'm not saying it to make it sound bad, but to illustrate how behind I am @_@. and I feel bad for being behind. =( but I shall catch up! *

xabiholic4life October 12 2010, 10:02:24 UTC

would have loved the fic if it had not been for the fact that we are in the same - no worse - situation at present.And the part of Nando and Gerrard wanting to leave hit a bot too close to home...Ohh why do things have to be so hard for those of us who bleed Liverpool red! :-(

ombu_tree October 19 2010, 01:05:44 UTC

Hello!

Thank you for reading and taking the time to give some feedback. I agree it's really quite depressing about our current situation - we've really hit a new low. Hopefully with the new owners and what not, we can start the slow rebuilding process. Just a shame that all these excellent players, who should be winning matches day in, day out, are caught up in this mess of a transfer.

I guess the positive is, things can only get better, right?