Fic: A Glass of Wine and Thee (2/2) (CM, Rossi/Prentiss, NC-17)

[omgmetoo]

Title: A Glass of Wine and Thee (2/2)
Author: wojelah
Pairing: Emily Prentiss/David Rossi
Spoilers: None
Rating: NC-17
Summary/Author's Notes: The title has its roots in the Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam. For smittywing, just because, with huge kudos to mingsmommy and smacky30, for cheering, beating, and betaing. The fact that there are no mysterious extra limbs is due to their

Comments

[theras]

durrrrr, murble? nope, no words. too much hot; the detail is amazing. back later with actual coherency.

[wojelah]

\o/ I am SO glad you liked it. Lack of coherence is a heck of a compliment. :D

[smacky30]

Since I've pretty much offered to sell my soul for this I feel like I've run out of original things to say. Again the word that comes to mind is lush. Their movements, their conversations, their need - all so perfectly laid out. Beautiful story.

[wojelah]

Since you pretty much helped me beat it with sticks, avoid random limbs, and remind me that that Colorado is not Texas, I am thrilled that you have remaining brainpower to comment at all, let alone comment with lovely things like the above. THANK YOU.

[mingsmommy]

Like smacky30 I feel like anything I can say will be repetitive but I can't NOT tell you again how wonderful it is.

First, the changes you made since the last time I read it are all PERFECT.

The section in the club is one of the most, if not THE most, sensory evocative pieces I have ever read, either in fanfic or from a book I bought at Borders. It absolutely engages every sense, I smell the smoke, I taste the wine, I feel the beat, I see the lights, I hear the music, the voices...and under it all the throbbing want from both of them. I really don't think there's anything you could have done to make that scene more perfect.

The second part is so THEM. So cautious, so wary and careful, but still wanting each other SO much. And hot. HOT. Hot, hot, hot.

If I quoted every line I loved, I'd quote the whole thing but a few of the more brilliant ones (IMHO):

She bobbles the glass a little as she turns to set it on the bar. A few drops splash onto her arm, winding around to the inside of her wrist. She brings her hand to her mouth without

[wojelah]

*FLAILS BACK AT YOU* You are such a fabulous cheerleader, question-asker, and fic consultant. That you think highly of this means so much. :D

[bluerosefairy]

Oh dear fluffy Lord, that was three kinks I knew I had (corsets, priest collars, and public sex), but somehow, I don't think I conceived of just how hot that scenario is. Your Dave/Emily is impeccable, especially young!Emily, all 22-year-old bravado of her.

Excellent, excellent work.

[alicat713]

Well holy shit.

This is so wonderful I want to cry. You are a wonderful writer and I'm going to stop typing before I start blubbering. I'm trying to put together a coherent sentence that best conveys my appreciation for this but... holy shit.