New Fic: Where We Ought to Be (5/5 - complete)

Jun 10, 2007 01:43

Title: Where We Ought to Be (Part 5/5 - complete)
Author: wojelah
Fandom: SGA, McKay/Sheppard
Rating: R
Spoilers: Through "Sunday"

Author's Notes: This fic was born the first time I saw this ep, on a bet/dare/whim/IM conversation with omglawdork. Then it exploded. Now it's finally done, and I'm still standing around looking confused as to what, exactly, ( Read more... )

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lynnmonster June 11 2007, 04:52:08 UTC
I thought this was sad and vibrant and thoroughly realized and lovely. And sad. Did I mention sad?

Also, it was human in the best of ways, with life and death happening to people all at once without neat and clear delineations. I really liked seeing Rodney and John (and Carson's family) so vividly in such a setting.

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wojelah June 12 2007, 01:44:44 UTC
Thank you! I was really trying to get across that weird sense you get, around a funeral, where life is still happening, but feels even stranger than usual, because you're not totally processing everything. I'm so glad it worked for you - thanks for letting me know!

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Re: Incoherent, rambling feedback wojelah June 12 2007, 01:48:36 UTC
Anna -is- very like Rodney - with a few key differences, though, not the least of which is the family she grew up in. I'm so glad she and all the rest of them came across so well for you; I'm very fond of them all myself! Thank you -so- much for letting me know you enjoyed it! *passes you a tissue*

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zoniduck June 11 2007, 08:47:47 UTC
This was wonderful! I enjoyed every bit of it, but especially your vision of the Beckett family. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. :-)

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wojelah June 12 2007, 01:51:29 UTC
I'm so glad - thank you for the wonderful compliment!

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attempt_unique June 11 2007, 18:55:00 UTC
I just wanted tp say that your story is lovely. The Beckett's were wonderfully characterized and John and Rodney were very true to themselves.

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wojelah June 12 2007, 01:51:56 UTC
Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know!

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wojelah June 12 2007, 01:53:23 UTC
I have an ENORMOUS crush on Anna, so you're hardly alone, there. :) If you have the time to share, I'd be interested in knowing a little more about what you mean about Mrs. Beckett's reaction, just because it was hard for me to figure out how to handle that in my own head. Regardless - thank you so much!

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