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F: A Few Mornings in January (PG-13, R/S)

Apr 04, 2006 15:46

(Lame) Title: A Few Mornings in January
Author: omgsubtext, now last_radio
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 6666, exactly. And it was an accident.
Disclaimer: I'm JKR. This is all mine. ... Am I fooling anyone? No? Good. Have a cookie and don't sue me.
Notes: Written mostly for blanketforts. Pure fluff. Like, what little plot there is was spun from sugar. You've been warned.

( This is what I wrote on time. )

fic, fluff, r/s

Comments 46

jadis31 April 4 2006, 23:50:24 UTC

Oh YAY! I was just this morning thinking that I wished you'd finished this (and your Scarvesnhats as well, but really, this is enough to keep me HAPPY). I love how casual they are, how comfortable. Really the whole relationship is... adorable. really, that's the word for it. Very nice :D

omgsubtext April 5 2006, 02:35:57 UTC

Hehehehe. My scarvesnhats thing is on my to-do list, but since there is no trying to keep that one fresh, it's going to have to wait for after wellymuck.

And thanks so much for commenting. It's like, whoa, someone cares!

spammityspam April 5 2006, 00:00:03 UTC

YAY!

omgsubtext April 5 2006, 02:37:21 UTC

Yo momma.

expositionary April 5 2006, 03:35:01 UTC

YES!

If this is what happens when I prod you, I will have to do it a lot more often. :D

I honestly loved each and every word of it, but I think the second-last line is what really got me. Perfect.

(If you ever do need me to beta, I'll probably have to wrack my brains to find improvement to suggest, because honestly I don't think I can find any shortcomings here.)

omgsubtext April 5 2006, 03:59:42 UTC

If it weren't for people who prod, I don't think I would ever do anything. So yes, prod away, whene'er the fancy strikes. ^_^;

And thank you so much. And -- bah. When (not if) I need a beta, there will be shortcomings. There are shortcomings. S'matter of fact, I might ask you to help me with this'un should I get the notion of crossposting it stuck in my head.

musesfool April 5 2006, 04:19:36 UTC

I love this so much. So adorkable.

omgsubtext April 5 2006, 15:37:45 UTC

Teehee. :x Thanks.

nebt_het April 6 2006, 01:28:03 UTC

This is amazing! The last two lines just sum up their whole relationship perfectly. Great job!

omgsubtext April 6 2006, 02:00:04 UTC

*comment dance* Thanks! I tried to stretch that part out into smut and it was just losing me my groove (awkward and off-beat as that groove might be) so I just cut it down to... that. Yes. woot.

nebt_het April 6 2006, 04:02:36 UTC

Short and sweet wins the prize...or is that long and lean? Well this worked great whatever way!