fic: babysitting the cub (teddy lupin, g)

[kennahijja]

Title: Babysitting the Cub
Author: kennahijja
Character(s): Teddy Lupin-centric
Rating: G
Length: 1666 words
Summary: Little Teddy Lupin meets a strange wizard during an outing in Diagon Alley...
Note: Dedicated to kikei with lots of love, and beta-read at warp speed by melusinahp. Title has been filched from 'Deathly Hallows'.

Comments

[magnetic_pole]

Ah, lovely! Just like Harry, Teddy is caught up in a network of relationships he doesn't fully understand. A quiet but telling slice of life--enjoyed thoroughly! M.

[kennahijja]

Thanks very much!

[annuscka]

That was lovely! I always like fics from children's perspectives, and Teddy does have an interesting one for sure!

[kennahijja]

It was my first try at child perspective, and I'm glad it worked for you!

[bk03]

Very nice piece. I like how you told the moment from a young Teddy's POV, and I think you captured him perfectly.

[kennahijja]

Thanks very much! :)

[nuclearsugars]

Oh wow, I really love how you were able to write from Teddy's POV and the way you wrote Draco is superb! Great work!

[kennahijja]

Thanks! I'm particularly happy you liked Draco here :).

[sibyllevance]

Oh wow brilliant. How I heart genfic. Your writing is very sensible, I love the way you describe Teddy's childishness, the Pygmy Puff, the way he sniffs, the way he changes the colour of his hair. I loved Draco and Andromeda in this, too, and everything looks very realistic, down to the almost duel and Andromeda's cold but very polite reaction.
Thank you so much for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

[kennahijja]

I'm very glad you enjoyed it! I based Teddy's mannerisms on my best friend's son when they came to visit this summer :).