Smoke and Signal Fires // Gokusen 3 SP

Feb 24, 2012 21:32

Smoke and Signal Fires
Ogata Yamato/Takasugi Reita
PG-13, 3760 words, Gokusen 3 SP
To Reita, Yamato represents a lot of firsts. Their back story, based on the Gokusen 3 SP and movie.

Reita first discovers cigarettes when he's fourteen and Yamato is fifteen. )

%oneshot, takaki yuya, tamamori yuta

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crazy_otaku911 February 25 2012, 14:31:32 UTC
SHHHHSLKJFIES:DFJ

I'm running out the door, cannot coherent comment, BUT IHU AND ILU FML T_T REITA UGHSLDFKJ ♥

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omoikkiri February 25 2012, 22:08:37 UTC
do you ever coherent comment? :|||

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crazy_otaku911 February 25 2012, 22:14:01 UTC
... don't I usually? :|

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omoikkiri February 27 2012, 03:42:57 UTC
I'm curious what "SHHHHSLKJFIES:DFJ" means 8D like... Stfu? Shihaha? 8D

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chained_akame March 3 2012, 22:29:20 UTC
That was really nice. At the first scenes, I was completely like "Boys will always be boys", but then it got more serious and it finally showed more of them...and how they feel <3

I really liked everything in it, it was raw and really well-written and it sure can be easily put as their background story :D

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omoikkiri March 4 2012, 02:19:29 UTC
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it :DDD

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isthisdestiny March 12 2012, 02:49:01 UTC
I don't know how I missed this when you first posted it! I really loved this <3 I always wondered about the story behind Yamato and Reita after watching the Gokusen movie and finally someone has written about it! =D The part with the parents talking just makes me so sad until I think about what comes after.

And imagining a tough!Tama is always fun :3

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omoikkiri March 14 2012, 00:01:35 UTC
Aww thank you :D (I only cross-posted to comms that get a lot of traffic so it was easy to miss I'm sure XD)

I loved Gokusen!Tama XD

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damagea March 25 2012, 08:30:46 UTC
It's... wonderful? T_____T IDEK but I loved it. ♥♥♥ You pulled up the whole story really nicely and I could easily imagine this as their background story.

Thank you for writing this! I enjoyed it. *short comment is short*

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omoikkiri March 25 2012, 08:53:53 UTC
what, "short comment" is so not short ♥ thank you though, I'm glad you liked it :3

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snowqueenofhoth March 25 2012, 16:30:09 UTC
OUCH. This was good and hurty in all the right places. <3

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omoikkiri March 25 2012, 20:55:31 UTC
aw thank you <3

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