Beginners Luck! // Beginners!

[omoikkiri]

I'd like to place all the blame on risakochan, crazy_otaku911, and damagea, my Enablers ♥.

Beginners Luck! (AKA "Beginners Fuck")
Tachibana Danji/Shimura Teppei
R, 2216 words, pwp
Set at the end of the second episode of Beginners. Angry sex by the pool at night. [(see screencaps)]

Comments

[litofroggy]

This is .... Oh my-

*dies from nosebleed*

[omoikkiri]

Noooo *stuffs up your nose with tissues* don't die XD

Thanks for reading!

[dritree]

OMG! I love this and i LOVE the drama too, And pool sex is just LOVE TOO!!!
I love how you wrote them too, totally like the characters, bickering constantly and not wanting to be all cuddly and stuff!
And the end when TEppei realises they were by the pool and gets all angry at Danji for washing himself!! Love it!!

[omoikkiri]

Thank you so much!! I'm happy to hear you liked it!
I love the drama too, the characters are all so funnn.

[orange_c_c]

8DDDDDD

I suppose I SHOULD leave a proper comment, but... just... 8DDDDD

[omoikkiri]

Um... XDDDDDD? ahaha

[kira_shadow]

ok it'll take me a couple of hours to get the grin off my face again XD

I really enjoyed this. I think you got their characters really well! the way Danji has that cold side and yet underneath there's a very caring person. and then Teppei, who will sometimes talk before he has thought about what to say and who can be impulsive and and well just like THIS! :DD

"But... 'Peach'?"

Teppei just gives him a look, all sarcastic and self-deprecating.

"Well, shit."

Peach XD

also, the smut is so well written *admires* it's really hot and yet subtle in a way? can't really describe it but I really, really like the way you wrote it!

especially this bit:

In response, Teppei sucks rhythmically on Danji's tongue, trying to mimic Danji's thrusts. Danji moans again, then shifts his weight so he can reach a hand down between them and stroke Teppei. A few swipes with his thumb over the head of his cock and Teppei is sent over the edge, come spraying over both of their stomachs from the force of his orgasm. His breath comes out in a big shuddering

[omoikkiri]

lmao... you know... I think Kisumai fandom is coming to be known for having a ton of porn (which is totally fine by my book 8D) but I've noticed we're also so much less embarrassed about commenting on it. Like, there used to be talk on author memes about how pwps never got many comments because everyone was too embarrassed... All of which leads me up to: I think this is the first time I've ever seen anyone quote the actual orgasm bits in a fic?! loool I love this fandom, really ♥

But that aside! Thank youuuu I'm glad you liked it! \o/ Super happy with these comments about characterization too ;aksgdlam!

[kira_shadow]

people are always complaining about fic, no matter what. either it's too much porn, too little porn, too little fic in general... idk *shrugs* I don't mind having all the porn either XD

lol well we all grow older? more mature (or maybe not)? or maybe it's just that we become used to things? I don't know I think I lost my inhibitions to talk about porn and the like openly because I wrote fanfiction myself so... I don't know how to explain it ^^; I just don't get embarrassed about that? ._. ♥

and well I really liked how you wrote out that part! ._.

*hugs* :D

[omoikkiri]

(XD appropriate icon is appropriate!)

I didn't think the comments about Kisumai fandom being porny was a complaint at all 8D and I'm sure we're all very happy about it lol

Annnyway, thanks again, really! :3 ♥

[isthisdestiny]

So I can't wait till you watch the newest episode of Beginners and see that moment where for a split second I actually thought this fic was going to happen.

FLAIL FLAIL FLAIL- insert coherent comment here-

Uh but yeah, you're one of the only people who makes me like KitaFuji \o/

[omoikkiri]

lol OH HOW I WISH :X (off to go watch it soon!)

Aw, imo KitaFuji are great because there's endless potential for them to bitch at each other in fic ahaha so much fun to write (the right reasons, I have them)! But ridiculousness aside, thank you, it always means a lot to hear that people who don't usually like Ki/F like them in my fic(s) because it means I must be expressing my love of them in the right way or something XD.

Also I'm glad you liked the fic! :D