Press Play, Sing Me My Song // KinKi Kids

Nov 02, 2012 23:52

Press Play, Sing Me My Song
KinKi Kids, 4U, Machida, They
PG-13, 2582 words, vocaloid!AU, [Warning]Character death (...sort of?)
There's a reason mysterious songwriter SHAMANIPPON only writes for Koichi.

Koichi has perfect rhythm, perfect pitch, perfect poise. )

domoto tsuyoshi, %oneshot, domoto koichi, kinki kids

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einery_here November 3 2012, 07:36:31 UTC
Oh. Karma will get those two wherever they go, won't it.
Perfect idea, wonderful writing.

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omoikkiri November 4 2012, 01:49:28 UTC
They're meant to be~ ^^

Thank you!!

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ladyxenax November 3 2012, 07:37:40 UTC
That was interesting ))

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omoikkiri November 4 2012, 01:50:44 UTC
Thanks!

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lilly0 November 3 2012, 09:26:39 UTC
This was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks so much for sharing!! ♥

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omoikkiri November 4 2012, 01:51:16 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it :)

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margotleclerc November 3 2012, 10:29:46 UTC
I love this AU so much !
The last part made me shed tears.
Thanks for writing and sharing this fic.

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omoikkiri November 4 2012, 01:52:21 UTC
Aww, I didn't mean to make anyone cry! >_< Though I'm totally flattered that you did, and I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you for reading and commenting!

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risakochan November 3 2012, 10:43:43 UTC
ughhhh i kind of like cried a little and then giggled /sane >_>

the ending was really poignant ;-; i love them together ♥♥♥♥♥ (and how did you not realise it was character death -__-) also! i'm glad 4U made a brief appearance (but They? is the intern ryota then? :3)

also, i think i really liked the PAUSE/PLAY/REWIND sectioning, it helped make the timeline clearer and also adds to the whole music and sound theme centralising the fic :D

in short, i love this fic asf;lasdkjgsdjf;lsajkklkfasdjf;ljas;dlfj i'm so glad i read it tonight when you told me to~ ♥♥♥

crap i have no kinki/tsuyopon icon WHYYYY ._. /fails

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omoikkiri November 4 2012, 01:57:46 UTC
ilu ahahahaaa

I wrote it out of order okay XDDD so in my head the way it happened was more like, ko-chan dies > and then gets revived and becomes the vocaloid, so uhhhhhh idk, because he lives on (and I spent most of the latter half of working on this fic writing him "alive") I sort of... forgot 8D that he died 8D;;; cries.

There should be a mention of Eda in there, and the unnamed intern is YamaRyo, yep!

;kalmgalmgka /o/♥

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