Comments | omoikkiri: Waiting Game // EXO

omoikkiri

Waiting Game // EXO

Nov 24, 2013 23:03

Waiting Game
Xiumin/Luhan
NC-17, 3380w, porn with feelings
For every time Lu Han touches Minseok in public, Minseok touches Lu Han back in those exact same places at night.

( Minseok seems to have acquired a taste for making Lu Han wait, teasing Lu Han with nimble fingers and a sassy grin until Lu Han is practically coming out of his skin with need. )

%oneshot, luhan, xiumin

Comments 26

jecca_o9 November 28 2013, 06:41:47 UTC

Oh this is beautiful. I love Luhan's characterization and the way you write smut--nothing felt off or weird or like a mental checklist of crossing off things characters have to do before the sex, which is rare in this fandom.

Thanks for this. <3

omoikkiri November 28 2013, 23:41:02 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so flattered by your comment >_

cathmorland November 30 2013, 13:00:29 UTC

SCREAMS this is perfect!!! thank you so much for writing this ;u;

omoikkiri November 30 2013, 22:32:47 UTC

omg but thank you for reading and commenting!

anonymous November 30 2013, 13:51:14 UTC

A fluffy smut.. is this even the correct description for this? I love this, thank you so much for writing it!

dowisdom May 12 2014, 04:55:01 UTC

oh my this was so great! it was so hot but i'm also like in a puddle of emotions and idk what do do with myself rn wow