Pictures

Dec 25, 2009 00:35


Title: Pictures
Author: Read more... )

genre: !angst, rating: g, pairing: yesung/ryeowook, genre: !fluff

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coffee92 December 24 2009, 16:54:03 UTC
Hey baby - wrong title...
OMG *spazz* this is sooooooo cute!!
Argh Yesung is such a stalker - (YS: no i am not)
Yes yesung you are. But it's so cute tho.. he just search for wookie pic and listen to his voice and watch his performances
and the empty bed bit is just sad.... =(
"He admitted that he’d sometimes come very close to crossing the line to where he thought he’d burst and blurt out a confession there and then, but being Yesung, he’d always managed to hold it in."
--> Yesung oppa I admire you <3 so strong neh ( ... )

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omona_shi December 25 2009, 02:55:16 UTC
:DD
idk how to reply because i've already spazzed about your comment on msn. :p

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g_myzo December 24 2009, 17:52:07 UTC
That was so cute ^^

“Wookie, I’ve liked you since square one.” I kept thinking in my head = "Wookie, I’ve liked you since square 100x100."
cos of the icons. uh, yeah. never mind me..

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omona_shi December 25 2009, 03:15:02 UTC
thank you!

LOL. 100x100! idk, but i thought of boardgames when i wrote that. anyways.

glad you liked it! <3

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crissixx December 30 2009, 15:29:36 UTC
yeah, so,

STALKER YESUNG. omfg i love how you have already captured his fail so perfectly from line one.

"but what sometimes made his heart flutter violently were the little avatars that popped up every so often that had the both of them in a small 100x100 square with the tiny words ‘Yewook’ printed on an empty corner of the colour-filled icon."

okay, i was actually tempted to use a yewook icon right here. until i realised, i didn't have one.

"If he gets too bored with talking with his turtle, he’d switch on his laptop and run through a few stage performances and just watch Ryeowook sing and he’d miss having that feeling that yes, Ryeowook’s there to shine."

tense change there, by the way ^^
but i love the first bit and the last bit - you personalise his fail so perfectly, but the last bit was a;lsdkfja; ! ♥ i have no words to describe it, it's just-

and okay i knew you would incorporate ninja!hanchul and donghae into it lmao!

oh, and, tense changes here:

"Only one day, Yesung gets the short end of the stick as he walked in ( ... )

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omona_shi December 30 2009, 15:46:23 UTC
WHY. WHY IS MY BRAIN SO FULL OF PRESENT TENSE.
TELL ME. GOD. WHY

*dies*

thank you so much! i love you- and i'm going to spazz on msn now. :DD

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