JE fic: Mothership 2/2 [Jin/Kame; R]

[omoshiroina]

Title: Mothership (2/2)
Author: momo (omoshiroina)
Pairing: Akame
Genre: AU, Stupid Romance, Weirdness
Summary: Kame loses Jin, throws a plastic star to the sky, and finds Jin again. This part turned out sadder than I expected. D:
Notes: Part one is here. Y'all can blame naruchu for the ending, and this whole fic in general. ♥

Comments

[chiseen]

wow. what an ending.
i would've been contented with whichever ending as long as they ended up together, but the way you wrote it was nice. how jin came back for him.
210th lunar eclipse, huh? i'd like to see what would happen, but is that asking too much? ^^;;

the weirdness of this story makes me love it!
so.. jin's actually an alien? he's not just bluffing?
if jin can build spaceships. his IQ must be very high! o.o He'll be able to find great jobs on Earth! =D

perhaps.. on Jin's planet, malexmale can make babies? and live forever? that would be nice.. akame making healthy beautiful babies and living together forever. ^^

Thanks for writing!!! *huggles*

[omoshiroina]

The 210th lunar eclipse Jin is talking about is actually February 23, 2098, if I'm not mistaken. looolll yeah.

so.. jin's actually an alien? he's not just bluffing?

It depends on how you see it in the story. :P

[chiseen]

ROFL~
2098?? They'll be dead if i'm not mistaken. Unless Jin's magical powers to prolong life stretches to Earth as well and to his 'mate' as well.

i choose to see Jin as.............

[aikazu23]

in case anyone is interested....

don't know how accurate this is....
but it is NASA

http://sunearth.gsfc.nasa.gov/eclipse/LEcat/LE2001-2100.html

in the 21st century alone there will be 230 lunar eclipses

learn something new everyday... :)

[chiharu]

D; This is supposed to be an Akame fic, but I totally fell in love with Yuichi instead

[omoshiroina]

Yuichi deserves your love, anyway. :)

[chiharu]

btw, I loled at Tachibana Keita

[omoshiroina]

Hah. He totally ninja-ed himself in.

[blackblood0688]

Aww...that's so sweet...even though Jin's lines were a little cheesy, but still..it's romantic ne. Good job!~

[omoshiroina]

Jin's lines are supposed to be cheesy. He's, idk, not exactly "human", in a sense. Err.

[87085]

aghh. alskjdfasdfjkl
Jin's so a+ awesome and totally sweet and oblivious and innocent and a;'sldfklaj, and Kame's so in luurveee and longing and pining and totally not getting over it and also a;'sldfklaj. and they fall asleep under the stars, and Jin's pretty much like YOU ARE MY PRINCESS, and kame is like *snuggle snuggle* and omg this fic pwns my soul so hard l;kajsdkf
acch. kame'd actually gotten used to Jin always being there at the beginning .___. ♥
and then he got emotional in his classroom because his kindergarteners are singing twinkle twinkle. and again a headache when tachibana sings for him ♥ oh kame, kame, kame.
the scene where he finds Jin again - so perfect .__. with the glow in the dark star and Jin having gone through so much so he could be with Kame "I told them the truth. I told them I found you." ;akjdsdkfj JIN. you're so sappy and such an incredible alien <3
god, this story so amazing. every bit of it <3

and all is right with the world
♥

[omoshiroina]

alskjadjskdjs THANK YOU ♥ I'm expecting a barrage of wtf was that comments, but I'm so happy you liked it.

IT'S SO RANDOM THERE ARE SO MANY CELESTIAL BODY REFERENCES IN THIS FIC IT'S MIND-BOGGLING. ;__; I mean. Yeah. I needed someone to sing w-inds. It's in the stars, and Tachibana Keita was just...there in the back of my head.

Jin is the cheesiest alien ever ajaklshajsd. I can't believe he's like this in my head.

[angel_mari]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! I love it!! Jin is an alien....or is he? I love how you've left it up to the readers interpretation!!^^ Any chance of a sequel? Come on!! Who wouldn't want to see Preggers-Empress-Kame?^^ Anyway great fic!!