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omoshiroina

akame oneshot

Feb 26, 2008 05:23

Title: Time Check
Author: nami (kanzenrei)
Rating: G
Pairing: Akame
Summary: Kame thinks too hard about the future. Jin prefers living in the present.
Notes: For newlyfallensnow, who turned 18 today, and tinzedesu, who’ll be 16 tomorrow. Happy birthday guys ♥ Fic partly based on a prompt by the former way back when.

( Forget what we're told, before we get too old. Would you lie with me, and just forget the world? )

Comments 54

shangrilove February 25 2008, 22:14:02 UTC

NAMI WROTE FIC! XD

♥

Jin and Kame holding hands... sitting on a park bench... watching kids... THIS IS SO SWEET!

Wah. Kind of sad. Well, just a bit. Since Kame keeps on trying to pull away. .__. How could you do this to Jin, Kame? *cries some more.

But i'm really glad that you're writing. And posting. And getting inspiration. Looking forward to more stuff from you. And momo. ♥♥♥

omoshiroina February 26 2008, 06:41:02 UTC

Ahahaha, has it really been that long? I guess I've just been a bit too busy these days. I'll try to give Momo a good hard poke for you xD

asmilewaiting February 25 2008, 22:46:10 UTC

Aaw ^^ That was sweet. I love the way you wrote the differences in Kame and Jin's personalities, while at the same time making them compatible. The end to this is perfect ^_^

omoshiroina February 26 2008, 06:43:46 UTC

Thank you. And I'm happy you agreed with the ending :)

gingifere February 25 2008, 23:32:25 UTC

I'm so happy to see you writing again!!

This was sort of melancholic. I love the way Kame is so focused on the future, obsessing over everything in that silly, silly way he does, and yet Jin's so concerned with living in the now and living life to the fullest. Your Akame always makes my heart go doki doki. ♥♥♥.

kanzenrei February 26 2008, 07:24:26 UTC

Staying alive xD

Yes, it does have a despondent feel to it. Somehow this facet of Akame is so much easier to write than the other...happier, more lighthearted ones.

Thank youuu ♥

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kanzenrei February 26 2008, 07:27:55 UTC

Awww thank you so much :)

I love nice quotes. To have you say that about something I wrote is ♥♥ owns one too

semm February 25 2008, 23:52:09 UTC

SO SWEET :) and Kame here's just ♥, i really like the way you wrote him.

“Adults are always busy,”
“They are, unfortunately,” Jin says quietly, glancing at Kame.
Favourite part, really. So sad yet touching.
Thank You.

kanzenrei February 26 2008, 07:29:35 UTC

Kame makes things so hard for himself. Good thing Jin's there to set him straight xD

My pleasure~