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"Goodnight," double drabble, post-camp, Pyramid

Oct 05, 2006 19:23

Francescu wakes from a nightmare, grabbing at power.

He pauses while reality floods back into his consciousness; no attackers, no threats, just a quiet, steady sobbing from the other room. His experience tells him it is another nightmare. Ken is murmuring something, gently, but Omi continues to cry.

Francescu sits up and hugs his knees. Ken is ( Read more... )

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marezydoats October 5 2006, 23:50:15 UTC

That's completely and absolutely beautiful. ♥

on_target October 5 2006, 23:53:15 UTC

♥

Thank you!

danceallknight October 5 2006, 23:53:59 UTC

D'aaaaaaw ♥

on_target October 5 2006, 23:55:37 UTC

I SHOULD WARN FOR UNFORGIVABLE SAP

stop_mallettime October 5 2006, 23:57:12 UTC

IT'S OKAY I LIKED IT.

Also, I like your icon ;D

fingeroflife October 6 2006, 00:22:58 UTC

...swelfjsbghdf

Love. So much love. Stealing coherence. Cannot form complete sentences. No longer care.

♥

on_target October 6 2006, 00:26:36 UTC

That's a big heart, sir.

fingeroflife October 6 2006, 00:28:17 UTC

Well, yes.

on_target October 6 2006, 00:38:14 UTC

Thread 5

trensaddiction October 6 2006, 16:10:27 UTC

Wow, that's lovely. I enjoy the complexity of this relationship the three of them have going, particularly the way Omi and Francescu relate to each other. I mean, it's clear that they are not "in love" with each other, but one does get the feeling that there is plenty of mutual regard there. It's a very unique friendship.

This story does a lovely job of highlighting how brave Francescu is, in a way, in that even though he does not share Ken and Omi's background, he does not let that keep him from helping them deal with it. That? Gives me rather a large case of warm fuzzies for all three of them. Nicely done.