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Fic: When We Were Young 4/9?

Feb 16, 2013 21:56

Title: When We Were Young 4/9?
Fandom: A Song of Ice and Fire
Pairing: Sansa/Sandor
Word Count: 2244
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to GRRM
A/N: Modern AU set post ADWD. Special thanks to Kimberlite8 for her help with this!
Warnings: A bit of violence and a well deserved death in this part.

Chapter ThreeIn the morning, Sansa will board a bus to ( Read more... )

Comments 16

kimberlite8 February 17 2013, 04:38:14 UTC

This is so image-heavy, like a movie. You feel the pent up years of longing, the anger for time wasted, lives diverted by tragedy and loss.

The end of LF was very satisfying in its violent retribution. I'm reading a mystery right now called Still Life with this quote:

Peter swept aside Yogi Tea and Harmony Herbal Blend, though he hesitated a second over the chamomile. .... But no. Violent death demanded Earl Grey.

I know why Earl Grey is scarce in your house :P

onborrowedwings February 23 2013, 13:56:02 UTC

I've recently stocked up on Earl Grey again to fuel my murder writing :P

They each of them have gone through a long journey to get tho this point, and I love the way you've described that in the first sentence :) Thank you so much for helping to keep me on track with this!

westeroswolf February 17 2013, 20:18:15 UTC

Oh this is everything I want to happen! This chapter is complete wish fulfilment for me and beautifully written. The scene of Sandor watching the bus leave is so sad I really hope they get a slushy reunion : )

onborrowedwings February 23 2013, 13:57:06 UTC

Not quite slushy but I hope it has enough love in there to make you happy :) We've still got a way to go with these two before they're ready to fully move on!

maroucya February 20 2013, 02:09:42 UTC

It's always a pleasure to read a new LF death. And of course, a first kiss between our two friends (SanSan, evidently) is another undying joy. Both won't EVER get old.

Great chapter!!! I can’t wait for them to be reunited. (my heart bleeds every time they’re apart.)

onborrowedwings February 23 2013, 13:58:19 UTC

It so is, isn't it? I don't mind if you push him out the moon door, chop his head off or stab him, but I love to see him die in fic!

And yes, a first real kiss :) something to hold on to!

And I can safely say that that was the last time they'll be separated in this!