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Wait and See Chapter 38/38

Dec 11, 2012 22:55

Author:oncethrown
Rating:PG-13 to R
Genre and/or Pairing: Dean/ Cas
Spoilers: Up to the finale of Season 5
Warnings: Human!Cas
Word Count: wip (about 3900 this chapter)
Summary: Dean is the only member of Team Free Will to survive the apocalypse that almost happened. When Castiel is miraculously returned to him the two of them start patching their lives ( Read more... )

Comments 13

adjfdladfjldfjdlfjsdlfjdl robynize December 12 2012, 09:36:43 UTC

OH man what a wonderful, beautiful ending! I have loved this story so hard and waited gleefully for the updates. I almost hate to see it end lol. I am unbelievably thrilled that Cas and Dean have a baby son. Dean especially has to be exploding in joy. They are gonna be wonderful parents. Love seeing Chuck, ha ha, his reference to Mistress Magda, *fist pumps* Bobby having the retirement party, Dean realizing it really isn't his world anymore. And Sam and Chelsea and the babies, guh, so adorable. Really Sam? You marked Lizzie's foot with a blue circle? I really did laugh out loud at that ( ... )

Re: adjfdladfjldfjdlfjsdlfjdl oncethrown December 13 2012, 05:11:38 UTC

I am planning timestamps... maybe a one shot here and there. (she said in the comments for the 38th chapter of a story that was supposed to last 20 at the outside).

We'll see how that goes. I was banking on getting away without having to go into a lot of detail about the boys as parents because we've seen so much of them with Sophie, but we'll come back to them with their own kid.

Thanks so much for all of your lovely comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

trustingfrndshp December 13 2012, 03:37:13 UTC

I enjoyed this very much and will miss it. Thanks for sharing!

oncethrown December 13 2012, 05:06:17 UTC

Thanks for reading!

innogen December 13 2012, 03:59:45 UTC

I sense a parallel between Chuck's writing process as he tries to end his last book with you trying to bring this huge story to a close, successfully closing off every thread? A bit? Maybe?

Still, WOW!

::Happy Dance::

oncethrown December 13 2012, 05:05:56 UTC

Pah. That sounds like terrible cheating. I would never do that!

Umm... that wasn't the original intention, but the availability was there and I used it as a cushion. The problem was that the story was always going to end with Dean and Cas getting the house and the family and the baby, but the longer the story went on the more impossible it was to give that to them without it feeling forced and sudden, because the baby was a gift from god, so it was always going to crop up out of nowhere.

The Chuck idea is actually something that I stole from another story I wrote way back in the day, using someone just outside the story to deliver the epilogue because it makes it feel more complete. In the first draft the epilogue deliverer was actually Bobby and the draft was mind numbingly boring and then I was like "Duh. Chuck. We started with Swan Song, let's continue to steal."

Thanks for reading.

Edition 2,420 livejournal December 13 2012, 06:34:55 UTC

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oncethrown December 17 2012, 04:14:47 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked it!