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[mykindasong]

On this lovely Spring day (we hope it is, anyway) we welcome you to the...

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.♥ Comment for yourself only. Do not make threads for other people

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[alternatejess]

alternatejess @ hyuruhyuru. Only stuff under my name.

Note: I only restarted writing proper recently, so I am looking specifically for comments about the fics on the first page and that one fic on the second page. In other words, anything from Dec last year till now. Still new, so I am experimenting with different styles and the like, and do tell if there is something I need to improve on.

Mostly KAT-TUN (Nakame), and 2 Matsumiya PWP.

[yue_akuma]

Teh concrit: sometimes it gets a bit messy. Also, it looks like you're "shy" in your writing. IDK how to explain that, it's just an overall feeling.

Anything else? YOU ROCK. <3

[alternatejess]

Messy: Porn or plot? Ala: A little more details?

Shy? I am not 100% sure, but I admit I don't take my emotions to the max in most of the stories. If that is what you mean?

YOU TOO.