LJ Idol Week 16: Open Topic

[onda_bianca]

When my house caught on fire, I got out.  I didn’t raise doubt about the degree of monstrosity or whether or not I could manage the hot.  I didn’t hide under the bed and stay and pray to be left undead.

No, I saved those madman’s actions for my man instead.

I ignored the alarms that roared as his smoke blew up toward my ass.  I let him act as

Comments

[hellboy]

Your way of twisting words around into an easy rhythm is just amazing. Seriously, I wish I could do what you do.

[nyxocity]

I love the rhythm of this. Really deftly done.

[locknkey]

Lovely use of rhythm and rhyme - also like the dark comic tone. :)

[tijuanagringo]

HE DIDN'T EVEN LIKE YOUR DOG? oh dear... red flag warning!!!! ;-)

[lawchicky]

:(