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onda_bianca

LJ Idol Week 18: Jetsam

Mar 22, 2011 16:14

This entry has no (real) rhyme because the contents have no reason ( Read more... )

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Comments 34

mstrobel March 25 2011, 11:06:54 UTC

:( this was so raw, man.

onda_bianca March 26 2011, 13:01:33 UTC

Yeah... a bit different from the usual..

i_17bingo March 25 2011, 17:29:57 UTC

And when I say I live without regret, this particular incident is excluded.

I like this line a lot. I'm sure we all know how this feels.

onda_bianca March 26 2011, 13:01:44 UTC

Thanks...

roina_arwen March 26 2011, 01:21:00 UTC

For an entry with no real "rhyme" you definitely put some into the last two sentences! Sorry to hear about the break-up. *hugs*

onda_bianca March 26 2011, 13:02:32 UTC

Yeah...I guess I couldn't help myself.

I added the "real" in front of the rhyme at the end since I do realize some parts still do have it...

Thanks.

m_malcontent March 26 2011, 04:45:42 UTC

Well done, I like the change of pace from your usual. I hope things work out however is best for you.

onda_bianca March 26 2011, 13:02:42 UTC

Thank you. :)

locknkey March 26 2011, 08:34:23 UTC

as others have said - brutal and honest. I can't say it better.

onda_bianca March 26 2011, 13:02:53 UTC

Thanks:)