LJ Idol Week 4: “Nobody can ride your back if your back's not bent.”

[onda_bianca]

Clyde the camel carried too many humps. Two was too many yet he had three. Humongous and hairy, it was all you could see. What an oddity, a monstrosity, a civil sinsity

Comments

[roina_arwen]

LOL! Clyde needs to hook up with buddyhollylover's Alex! I think they'd get along famously. =D

[witchwife]

So long as Clyde also wants to transform into a llama.

This could be the start of something magical.

[roina_arwen]

It can be the CamelLlama Drama!

[buddyhollylover]

Alex has received the funding needed to proceed with his procedure. He appreciates your suggestion but seeing another three humped camel would just bring back too many bad memories of his former life.

[kandigurl]

Oh man, I love this, it's so cute. It reminds me of that "Sally the camel had three humps" song. :)

[jem0000000]

I like the poetic, rhyming feel behind the prose. :)

[fodschwazzle]

"They clucked a clunk of muck from their mouths, called Clyde a chump and thumped all three of his humps."

It sounds like this was really fun to write. I am almost jealous of the fun that seems to have been had writing this. Delightful imagery and assonance and camels.

[onda_bianca]

Thanks...and it definitely was. :)

[buddyhollylover]

Love the idea for the story! Only someone extremely smart and creative would think of a camel for this week's topic!

[onda_bianca]

I agree. Only a genius type actually;)