LJ Idol Week 9: Keep Calm and End This Meme

May 18, 2014 13:18

Its 7:46 in the mornin’, practically the crack of dawn and my second graders are already cuttin’ up. Actin’ a nut. Breakin’ my pencil sharpener and throwin stuff. Miss Teacher’s had enough, can’t they just sit down and shut the fuck up? I want to scream, inside I’m seething but I remember to close my eyes and focus on my breathing ( Read more... )

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bleodswean May 21 2014, 00:32:46 UTC
Cleverly written - some of your rhymes are great and the rhythm is particularly nice. With such an abundance of zest and creativity, have you considered another grade?

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onda_bianca May 23 2014, 01:23:26 UTC
Thanks. I have, but not seriously (although I did adventure into third grade for a year...like tuna milk that made me say YILK).

Really, this is just "one of those years"...last year was the best class I had ever taught so having the best back to back with one of the toughest is a bit rough.

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eternal_ot May 21 2014, 05:56:22 UTC
Oh! yes..this surely prompted me to say "Keep Calm and Carry On"....may things change for better..:) You do rhyme well.

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onda_bianca May 23 2014, 01:24:39 UTC
Thanks :)

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sinnamongirl May 21 2014, 21:07:10 UTC
You really hooked me with this, I felt so much sympathy for you.

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onda_bianca May 23 2014, 01:24:53 UTC
Thank you!

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cheshire23 May 22 2014, 00:29:38 UTC
I like the rhythm of this and agree with "Yilk!"

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onda_bianca May 23 2014, 01:25:57 UTC
Thank you:)

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mistearyusdiva2 May 22 2014, 02:41:14 UTC
Its a relevant piece of thought ... and then written without being too heavy ..... ohh yess and the milk and yilk .... went well with me too :) Well done .... rhyming isnt something I have tried .... i enjoyed it here to try and take it up sometime somewhere ... :)

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onda_bianca May 23 2014, 01:28:03 UTC
Thank you...:) Once you rhyme you won't be able to stop;)

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