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[ondoyant]

Shut Up I'm Dreaming (of Places Where Lovers Have Wings)
Andrew/Jesse
Slight AU

Author Notes: Dates and things might be a little bit off, and other things I can't say (they're spoilery, sorry!) have slightly changed. Present day. Liz, you are amazing for making whatever I write make sense. R, you want to peddle Nyquil with me illegally so you're

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[savetomorrow]

ahgfjgkghkhllhkhjk i'll leave an actualfax comment once i stop smiling like a creepy person

[ondoyant]

Creepy? No, no. Never. Enthusiastic! I'm glad you approve of this update :)

[savetomorrow]

Okay, okay, I'm still smiling like a creepy person, but I'll try and type a comment that isn't all incoherent keysmashing and hearts and exclamation marks.

Guhh, you brilliant person, you. I love this so much, my heart does some kind of stupid cartwheel thing every time you update. And, well, I'm not a doctor, but I'm pretty sure Cartwheel Heart is a fatal condition. So, if my comments just suddenly stop, it's safe to assume that your fic has killed me.
No but really, this is so, so, so very, very, veryveryvery lovely. Not just Jesse and Andrew -- who are perfect, btw, you write them amazingly -- but also Anna and her plants, and Ellen Page, and the Indiana baseball cap (I have so much love for that hat), and Andrew's ridiculous clothes, and Jesse thinking about Andrew's hipbones, and the cigarette memory, and all the texts and the jokes, and the cats, and and and mold spores. That's right. From now on, I'll always have a crazy smile on my face when someone mentions mold spores. Mold spores are romantic now. What even

[savetomorrow]

(AND CONTINUED, BECAUSE I CAN'T STOP GUSHING.)

Andrew nods, hangs up his last shirt, and looks right at home there in Jesse's space. He fits in so easily. He's taken up a corner of Jesse's apartment and a big chunk of his heart.

I just adore how Andrew fits in so easily, while Jesse is kind of neurotic about things. It's a lovely balance. Also, ugh, a big chunk of his heart. I most certainly did not put a hand over my own heart and say oh at my computer screen, no sir.

Andrew nods, says, "Sure, let me grab my phone," and Jesse realizes he's probably in love with him.That's probably my most favourite bit, because it's just so wonderful how it's this really, like, really ordinary thing that makes Jesse realise he loves Andrew. Just, you know, "let me grab my phone", and then it's just like... I don't even know, I just really adore that bit, because it's not some kind of larger-than-life moment, it's just "let me grab my phone", and it feels very real that something small like that would make someone realise they're in love. I have no

[ondoyant]

You. Are. So. Great. Thank you SO MUCH for this, I'm smiling like an idiot because this is so flattering and nice to hear, it makes writing this worth it. <3 :D

[ondoyant]

Oh my gosh. I can't even. I am so flattered right now I can't even process this.

[minghags]

huff.

[ondoyant]

Are you giving me 'tude.

[ondoyant]

ANNA, IS THAT YOU? :) Thank you thank you, I take it you liked it?

[ondoyant]

Thank you so, so much. Everybody's always saying such nice things and I'm just like :D

[sakurita]

I love the slow pacing of this story and all the delicious feelings between Jesse and Andrew. They are so adorkable!

[ondoyant]

They're pretty much precious, not going to lie. Writing them has been so much fun, I'm digging my foray into writing for the tsn fandom. <3 Thank you for reading + commenting, lovely!