Torchwood fanfic - Equals

[oneangstychick]

My first fanfic! Please be nice!

Title: Equals
Fandom: Torchwood
Word Count: 1342
Pairings: Owen/Mark Lynch, mentions of Owen/Diane, Owen/Katie
Warnings: Very R. Explicit sex, dub-con
Disclaimer: All characters, etc. belong to RTD. Special thanks to tw_transcripts for the dialogue

Comments

[owensheart]

I loved how Owen sees the two diferet rolls he is playig here. you showed very well how Owen was feeling in this episode very well.

Great fic.

[oneangstychick]

Thank you! That's how I saw it in that episode.

[wiredblowfish]

I like how you explored the power dynamic of this scene through sex.

[oneangstychick]

Thank you! i was going for something little different.

[nancybrown]

Very very nice, especially for your first fic. Felt the power differentials shifting all the way through. :D

[oneangstychick]

Why, thank you!

[jo02]

It may be your first fan fic, but it's certainly not your first attempt at writing? I really liked the writing and the insights.

[oneangstychick]

No, I've been writing for quite awhile (see my devart link). I'm new to fanfic, though, and I love it.

[hab318princess]

that was a pairing I'd not considered...you made it so plausible and got into Owen's head so well!

[oneangstychick]

Thank you! I just thought an character they put that much eyeliner on is meant to be shagging another guy.