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I Said No

Feb 15, 2010 20:02

Title: I said no (but I meant yes)
Author: onecasillas
Pairing: Sergio Ramos/Fernando Torres, Fernando Torres/Daniel Agger (implied)
Rating: R
Summary: It's been a year since Euro 2008, and Sergio still can't get over Fernando or the night that changed everything between them.
Word Count: 7017
A/N: Explains what happens with Fernando and Sergio during and ( Read more... )

fic: i said no, pairing: sergio ramos/fernando torres

Comments 25

9torres4ramos15 February 16 2010, 02:58:45 UTC

this is so good!!! it must have taken u 4ever to write, but its worth it cuz its awseome!! keep it up!

onecasillas February 16 2010, 16:46:35 UTC

It took me a couple of weeks, but only because I'm lazy, heh :)

I'm glad you liked it!

alor February 16 2010, 03:57:54 UTC

"He drives me insane," Fernando is telling him. "All the time. Even when he's not trying to. His smile, oh my God, Ser, you should see it."
okay that broke my heart a little bit ahhhhhaslfdjka.

Fernando lives in England, and loves England, and has his family there, and he's happy; Sergio lives in Madrid, and his friends are there, and he wants to die.
aaaaw hahahaha i snorted a little but IN A SAD WAY. HAHAHA. no really. ahhhhhhalskdfa.

ahhh, poor gago. =( that made me sad, ah. also, i love iker so much. and hahahah cesc calling fernando. OKAY THIS IS SO CUTE.

OKAY NO REALLY. THIS IS. SO. CUTE. THE HAPPY ENDING AND JUST AHHHALSFDKJAS I'M LIKE GRINNING. HAHAHAH. it's absolutely lovely. i actually just. adore this. you show so well how much sergio is aching for fernando and how much he loves him and just ahhhhhhalsdkfja. i love this. I LOVE THIS.

onecasillas February 16 2010, 16:54:38 UTC

Hah, I kinda laughed in that part too, but poor Ser :P

Thanks a lot! Your comment made my day, I really appreciate it :)

adorerdollylux February 16 2010, 04:15:12 UTC

ahhh god so so so sweet<3

onecasillas February 16 2010, 16:55:01 UTC

Thanks :)

gummy_love February 16 2010, 13:04:20 UTC

oh god this is so sweet and lovely <3

sergio kind of broke my heart at the beginning, but i glad everything worked out in the end. :)

onecasillas February 16 2010, 16:57:23 UTC

Thank you :)

I wasn't really sure about the ending, whether I'd make it a happy one or not, but I'm glad you liked it.

_woody_lein February 16 2010, 18:54:53 UTC

Ah loved to read it!
But I was surprised about the ending, but maybe this is me.
I don't see a future for him and Nando, to far away from each other.
But your fic is so well written and I enjoyed it so much also with this ending.
BTW, I read slash fics for a long time and I never ever met a man who is writing some.:)

onecasillas February 16 2010, 19:12:15 UTC

I wasn't too sure about the ending either, I was going to make it completely the opposite when I first started writing this (probably Nando and Dan still together or something) but it came out this way in the end.

I'm glad you liked it though :)

Yeah, there are a few more guys around here that I know that also write football slash, but we're obviously a minority, hah.