You'll Only Need One

[onefallshard18]

so yea, i havent written a short story in ages, so here's one. enjoy, or dont, either way

Comments

[aqhart]

i like the story i just feel it runs by too fast. it needs some of those colorful metaphors and creative adjectives. i feel like it rushes through some potentially dramatic scenes without capitalizing on the pressure of the situation.

[onefallshard18]

yes, i thought so too...i wrote it in like 2 hours...i think i will revise it and update it later...
thanks for the comment, i truly do value your opinion

[anonymous]

STOP POSTING THIS DAMN STORY

[onefallshard18]

who the hell??