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The West Wing (Josh/Donna)

Nov 01, 2004 19:15

Title: Mutable
Author: Anya (smut_queen)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Josh/Donna
Summary: We breathe, and things change.
Spoilers: Up to The Birnam Wood (6x02).
Betas: entropy84 & kika32.
Archive: Ask me first, please.
Feedback: smut.queen [at] gmail [dot] com
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine.

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nursedianaklim November 1 2004, 20:17:32 UTC

Aw, thank you for saying that. I was really nervous about posting this. :)

shipperchick November 1 2004, 20:40:00 UTC

*stares in awe*

That. Is really good. I especially love:

“Yeah,” she said finally. “I would have. This place - ”

“I know.” Now it was his voice that was small and broken.

*heart breaks* So sad. So true.

and this was so perfect. *heart breaks more*

nursedianaklim November 1 2004, 20:59:13 UTC

Aw, thank you for saying that. I really appreciate it. :)

*tapes your heart back together*

shipperchick November 5 2004, 10:47:56 UTC

*appreciates the gesture, even though heart incinerated at 1:16PM, 11/3/04.*

imacartwright November 1 2004, 22:16:56 UTC

That was so beautiful. Very hot, no lack of angst, but also full of hope. Wonderful!

nursedianaklim November 2 2004, 16:18:16 UTC

Thank you very much for the feedback. :)

leiascully November 1 2004, 22:18:47 UTC

♥

Really really.

nursedianaklim November 2 2004, 16:18:42 UTC

Aw, thank you. :)

skywaterblue November 2 2004, 00:43:56 UTC

Oh man. Office sex and angst... the bit at the end, where she asks him to leave? Fantastic. Mmm, and did I mention the office sex?

nursedianaklim November 2 2004, 16:21:51 UTC

Hee, thank you. I'm glad you liked. :)