(Love is) Ugly, Smooth, and Delicate <--working title.

[selfinduced]

Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Clark/Lex [Mmm, original, I know.]
Author: selfinduced
Note: This started out as a very simple little smut!fic idea. But then I started writing, and it just--it grew! And it wouldn’t stop! So, deepest apologies for the fact that it’s now almost 10,000 words, and the ‘smut’ is no longer the focus.Also, there might be some errors and

Comments

[ladydey]

Awesome. I loved this. Clark is an idiot. I loved when Lex finally gets it and the rambling phone messages.

Really great!

[selfinduced]

heee!

i loved writing the phone messages best. because i had a major craving for donuts and Warrior Angel. *bwhee*

thanks!!

[justabi]

"Is this spandex-that-feels-like-flannel stuff your new plaid? Because we’re definitely never going to have bed sheets made out of it, just so you know."

Love this. So perfect a way to make up. Love that you have a happy ending even though you were getting pulled another way. Love the extra plot you added, though I gotta say the sex was hot enough to stand on its own. Very good. *claps*

[selfinduced]

i just have this fetish for flannel plaid--it's all Clark's fault, you know--and i had a craving for donuts. i couldn't help myself. *g*

and the plot--i wasn't kidding when i said it "grew"--it sort of demanded and took over and i was like "ohshitohshit, find the right words!" trying to make it make sense. ;p

thanks for reading it again--i feel kinda bad about making you do that, since it's so friggin' *long*..lol

[justabi]

I love the plot. It's not too long. No worries. The story I just put up is over 60 pages long. Anyway. This really is great. You still have tense issues in a couple places and you forgot to insert the appropriate brand of scotch later...

[selfinduced]

yeah. i just found those. or at least, some of them. and edited. *facepalm*

haha, it's long for *me* which is, well, pretty damn short for most other people. but what is this 60page fic you speak of? is it new and i have not seen yet?

*must catch up on flist*

Oh...wow

[astrea9562]

Just...

Wow.

Great plotting, hot sex, sweet love, good switching from POVs and lovely piece over all.

This is seriously going into my favorites list - even without the final beta. *g*

How can I resist a seriously in love Lex that can't resist Clark as hard as he tries to be good.?

And who wants to ever resist Red!K Clark who does *not* vent his anger on Lex, but only his love?

Certainly not me. ;)

Perfect.

Thanks so much for sharing this.

*hugs*

Re: Oh...wow

[selfinduced]

awww, you're so sweet! *grins idiotically at screen*
i'm glad it the unbeta-edness doesn't get in the way too much. [i just went through and was *facepalm*ing at the little mistakes everywhere.] i think i have a badass-aggressive!Clark macking on resisting-noble!Lex kink. hee!

[kitkat3979]

This was fantastic. I loved it.

[selfinduced]

why thank you. :D

[spren_cious]

I suck! I should have read this yesterday, but I just couldn't with the sneezing and the coughing and just general dying...*g*

Wow! This was wonderful! You just ran with it, huh? *vbg*

Theirloveissomeanttobe

Lex would do anything for Clark, to protect him. It's a beautiful thing.

And the hotness of the smut, especially this bit...

Because the sight of that red, red mouth wrapped around the head of his cock is like the best kind of porn and he can’t let himself go. Can’t loose himself in the sensation because he needs to see this.

Oh yesssss! *Gah*

Thanks again, sweetie. This was great!

[selfinduced]

I suck! I should have read this yesterday, but I just couldn't with the sneezing and the coughing and just general dying...*g*
aww, i hope you feel better. as for reading--no worries, all you missed are some mistakes that i've now corrected. heh.

You just ran with it, huh?
yup. sorry for ditchng the first prompt--though i *do* plan on finishing that fic too.

theirloveistotallymeanttobe.

and thank *you* because if it wasn't for this challenge, this fic would never have been written. i guess deadlines of any type motivate me. =D