If you don’t love me, let me go. (3/?)

[onepairofpants]

Title: If you don’t love me, let me go. (3

Comments

[wedschilde]

oh that was so nice! ::::hugs::: transitions are very difficult and you worked it out well! it's a great write!

[onepairofpants]

I did? YAY! I'll trust your judgment because I bow down to your writing in awe. That's right I said it.

[wedschilde]

hah! my writing is just words :) i liked how you captured that hanging period between people when they want to say something but can't quite get there :)

it really is a great piece.

[onepairofpants]

well, you put together awesome words. so. that's all i have to say... >>

and you called it a piece. that made my day. ^_^ Thanks for reading!! *hug*

[freezextheframe]

...
they..floor..kissing
alcohol.
hot.
[sweating]

i dont know how to way what i want to say. words dont seem to like me much at the moemnt.
but this, this is wonderful. its angsty...but..its wonderfully so.
and the fact that they are all NOOO YOU NOT ALLOWED TO DRINK...that made me smile. cuz it was cute.

i was waiting for su to starting sining while drunk
but instead he did the
'im going to make a fool of myself now'
god i love that boy. oh so much i love that boy.

its comming along swimmingly my friend. quite swimmingly indeed.
and uha..yeah
[hugs micky] its ok. your allowed to like men. espically min. cuz..that is how it is supposed to be. and theres nothing wrong with it. at all. look at jae and yunnie.

[onepairofpants]

hehehe making junsu be a weirdo is my hobby. really. I can't get enough of it.

AND *squee* to you liking it. Even though you're a lying bastard and secretly you hate it... >>

[freezextheframe]

yes. i am lying.
i think your writting is complete and utter crap.

[smacks you upside the head]
i have four letters for you. and they are [in order]
B.A.K.A.

now multiply thoes four letter by a million and 53 and you get what you equal for thinking i'd ever lie about your writting. or any writting for that matter.

[onepairofpants]

*rubs the back of head* ow.

*huddles in a corner with blankie and lap top*

[yesserith]

OMG! Your history has touch my heart. I haven't seen Yoochun and Changmin like a posible couple, but now I can swear I saw them kissing each other on the floor. And now I truly belive they can be happy together. Poor Changmin :_( I can feel his loneliness like it was mine.

You are a great writter, please update soon!!!
And thank you so much for share this with us

[onepairofpants]

OMG SUCH A SWEET COMMENT!! Thank you! I'm so proud I made you... or at least helped you... like a pairing.

*blushes from head to toe* I'll update soonish!

[oldwillow_brook]

My heart hurts...Poor minnie....I want him to feel happy but NO STUPID CHUN is being A PUNK RAT! *slaps Chunnie* You know you like it like that *blushes* Look what I have become! *shame* XDDDDD. This is fabulous I love the drunk su to the horny jaeho couple to the angsty minnie/chunnie...I can't wait till the next update!

[onepairofpants]

hehehe kinky with the chunnie, ne? XD
drunk su, horny jaeho, angsty yoomin... that basically sums it all up doesn't it? lol

Thanks for commeeeentiiiing!!!!

[one_sour_cookie]

I LOVE YOU!!! I love this sooo much!!!!
Poor Changmin......Dont worry abouthow fast you update! Take your time!!!!!!!!!!!

seeya

[onepairofpants]

EEE! *is loved* ^___^

Aw thank you! I like updating fast but I don't want to rush it. So taking my time is what I will do. but still... I'll try and update soon.