If you don’t love me, let me go. (4/?)

Jan 03, 2007 17:01

Title: If you don’t love me, let me go. (4 ( Read more... )

yaoi, yoomin, jaeho

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jungsoo January 3 2007, 22:45:15 UTC
oh yeaah a new chapter, and a long one ! thank you ! ^^

Yoochun what are you doing ! ><
I hope he'll have a good explanation for this ¬¬'
*can't wait for chapter 5*

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onepairofpants January 3 2007, 23:40:58 UTC
thanks for the comment! lol everyone hates poor chunnie.

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jungsoo January 3 2007, 23:45:46 UTC
oh nooo I don't hate him D:
( -Chunni don't think I hate you, I still love you T__T *catch chunni pants*- )
But he sooo have to find a good reason for that =D

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reunionstory January 3 2007, 23:25:55 UTC
“I didn’t even notice you.” I felt my face grow hot and I looked down.

“You were distracted.” Yah huh?!!? *laughs* ya think?

This chapter was a bit lighter, well there's still that tension but at least there was some communication, albeit brief, but it was there, and I think even though Yuchun is as elusive as ever, I think he's venturing out, even if just a little.

I liked the heart to heart talk with Jaejoong. It seemed Changmin felt a little better afterwards. There was some slight awkwardness, but when are these talks never awkward, right? ^_^

I love it! Especially the hallway kiss, rarw. I think you communicate it very well, the wanting to talk about it but there's so much distraction and something else (hot!) ends up happening.

Oo ooo! “Hyung… shush….no talkie.” Heehee WIN!

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onepairofpants January 3 2007, 23:48:53 UTC
It was a bit lighter wasn't it? Well, I wanted to have a little less angst. Too much is unhealthy. *nod* But... there will be more. >>

I'm glad you liked the kiss, I was.. and still am... worried about how that turned out. And of course the jae and min talk. ^^

thanks for reading and giving wonderful comments!!!

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reunionstory January 4 2007, 00:35:55 UTC
But... there will be more.

Oh, I don't mind at all! In fact, I welcome it! With happy arms~~~ *squishes ChunMin*

Please don't worry about the kiss, I actually had to re-read it several times just to make it seem longer. *laughs* DongBang kisses are love. ^_~

thanks for reading and giving wonderful comments!!!

Hey you make the dongbang fangirl in me happy, it's only polite to reciprocate. XD

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onepairofpants January 4 2007, 00:45:53 UTC
you reread it?! I do that too! I didn't think anyone would do that with my writing... *blush*

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gal12 January 3 2007, 23:48:07 UTC
junsu was hilarious!!!!

poor changmin ;_;

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onepairofpants January 3 2007, 23:56:19 UTC
I'm glad you like JunSu. He has almost nothing to do with the plot so far but I can't help sticking him in there. It's just too much fun. XD

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aishix January 4 2007, 00:49:39 UTC
NOOO CHUNNIE! Stop breaking Minnie's heart!
I love the update. :D
And the JunSu. lol!

Hangovers are hell. I loved the way you wrote it. Kinda reminds me of my brother when I woke him up on New Years Day...

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onepairofpants January 4 2007, 01:02:32 UTC
lol aren't brothers great like that? mine used to make "mystery shakes" when he felt sick, which is where the idea came from ^^

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aishix January 4 2007, 03:57:35 UTC
I swore out loud that I would never drink again. Not if it meant another hangover.

The funny thing is, is that my brother has actually said this...lol

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onepairofpants January 4 2007, 06:39:56 UTC
LMAO! OMG that's priceless! Wow.

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ohifonly_x January 4 2007, 01:59:02 UTC
You weren't happy with this chapter?! Oh I saw otherwise lol and it flowed pretty well, I couldn't tell it was long at all >.>

“I require the finest muffins in all the land, for I am shrouded in glory.”

Yesss I love Junsu. And Jae's muffins must be the finest in all the land.

Stupid Yoochun get your head together you've done it twice already aren't those enough signs x.x
Jae is such a comforting role. Best of hopes to Changmin.

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onepairofpants January 4 2007, 03:10:32 UTC
It did? YATTA!

Thanks for reading/enjoying/commenting!! ^_^

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