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[onerag9]

So in response to the article referenced in my previous post, i decided to fire off a letter to Mr. Jack Thompson and address a few things:

Mr. Thompson

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[anonymous]

In the first 15 minutes of play, the main character participates in a drive-by shooting, assists in an armed robbery, and participates in a drive-by shooting.

You might want to nix the second "participates in a drive-by shooting".

[onerag9]

Fixed. Thanks for pointing that out.

[extrafox]

I still maintain that if you want to be taken seriously by anyone other than your friends, you're going to have to capitalize your 'i's. Also, I would have like to have edited this. It's very good, just minor issues.

[onerag9]

You can edit the next one.