194: Vanished things

Sep 18, 2007 18:11

"The true magic of this broken world lay in the ability of the things it contained to vanish, to become so thoroughly lost, that they might never have existed in the first place."Down from the sun, through the sky white with heat, shimmer-haze rising off this bleached stretch of sand between the water and the rocks. When I touch down, wings folding ( Read more... )

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john_h_holliday September 19 2007, 02:17:46 UTC
John wraps his arms about Gabriel, his cheek against his friend's, letting the angel feel him warm and present. "There is nothing I can say to ease your loss, but I am here, so you do not have to experience it alone." Very softly he says, "And Simon. You remember, so it is not just this dust. And I can witness your words, as you spread your memory to me."

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onewingbloody September 19 2007, 21:36:27 UTC
*says quietly* Thank you, John.

Yes. I remember.

Some days I wish I didn't.

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ooc r_vecchio September 19 2007, 12:29:41 UTC
Wow.

*thud*

I would happily read a novel the length of, well, Bleak House, for example (and that's loooong), if it was all written like that. As good as that. I repeat. Wow.

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Re: ooc onewingbloody September 19 2007, 21:31:25 UTC
N'awwwww, thankies! :D Eventually Gabe's prompts will probably add up to something like novel length-- I know I've written over 40,000 words for Smecker so far. ;)

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a_deaths_head September 19 2007, 19:24:30 UTC
Guh.

You put me to shame, you really do. This is nothing short of incredible. It's fantastic.

Win!

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onewingbloody September 19 2007, 21:32:23 UTC
Awww, thank you! I'm very glad and flattered you like it. :D

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number_eight September 19 2007, 22:13:21 UTC
OOC: Awesome, as always! <3

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onewingbloody September 20 2007, 01:07:08 UTC
*blows a kiss* Danke! :D

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anson_greene September 21 2007, 03:16:00 UTC
Stunning as always. Every time I read one of these I think it can't get any better and then you take my breath away all over again with the next one. You are amazing.

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onewingbloody September 21 2007, 08:03:57 UTC
*gives you a noogie!!!!!*

*cough* I mean, thank you. :)

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