Part one of my book...

[onfrozenpond]

Here it is again...I took it down this morning because to my dismay...nobody commented, and it made me feel bad and it made me feel like no one would read it. I'm self-concious when writing about my own life because it's not exciting or interesting in my mind. It's different when writing about music because it's not about yourself.

But, here it is

Comments

[zellie_bean]

"Now here is the other side of the coin: I am a Catholic."

"Our Lady of Heavy Metal…pray for me, and pray for us all. "

These two are great lines - gets your point across succinctly and succinct is most effective. They're also placed well organizationally.

Glad you put the chapter up again, give people time (: I had to set it aside because I knew when I came across it that I wouldn't have time to really sit down and go over it with commentary offered until this morning.

[onfrozenpond]

Thanks for your kind words. :) Means a lot to me.

I just hope others read it too or I might not want to publish it.

[jadedshock]

Sounds like a cool start!

I still think you're not leading a double life but you can expand on your ideas and explain to us how you feel better.

[onfrozenpond]

Thanks...I'm sure you know the Theresa character very well hahaha. Seriously, thanks for your kind words and your blessing to mention you in the book.

As for the "double life" thing...it will be elaborated on in later chapters and explained more. First chapters will be life pre-1998, and then later chapters will be up to now because they have to do more with the journey. I also hope I can get Father Brommer to write the foreward if I include one.

[22acaciaave]

I read it this morning and emailed you my comments:)

[onfrozenpond]

Yes you did, and thank you for them!

[aurorax999]

[onfrozenpond]

Hey thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it...I will most definitely post more snippets. I feel most of it will not grab people like the intro because I haven't lived an exciting life in my mind. But...we will see how the rest goes.