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snow_meow January 7 2010, 17:53:55 UTC
I like how their relationship progresses... they ups and downs.

I like how Pi feels betrayed by Jin when he doesn't trust Pi enough to reveal that he is a homeless person.

The depth of Pi's friendship really knows no boundaries. His compassion, care and concern makes him so endearing.

I can understand Jin's pride and dignity. It is his redeeming quality but it also blinded him when Pi reach out to him in friendship and not pity. I guess that is why Jin lied about being homeless.

I guess when you are in Jin's position, it is hard to know when a person is helping you because of friendship or pity. It is really a thin line between the two.

It so cute to see how things progress when Jin is able to stand on his own two feet.

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elanielyn January 11 2010, 13:14:19 UTC
Jin mistaking friendship with pity was something I really wanted to make a point of, because as you said, when you're in that position and not used to having friends that would help you because of frienship, it's easy to mistake one with the other, so I'm happy you noticed that ^^

Thank you for reading ♥

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dorayaki_chan January 9 2010, 09:04:53 UTC
>W< love it , even it's hard to swallow at first i feel so sorry for that gorgeous homeless .and how i wish i was one of the waiter there >O

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elanielyn January 11 2010, 13:15:37 UTC
Thank you for reading ^^

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sashjun January 9 2010, 17:36:26 UTC
I might have burnt out commenting on stuff over at je_holiday, but I want to at least say once again, how great and precious this was. How unbelievably the story flowed and fitted them and all that.
Just <3 and thank you for writing this, again and again and again ...

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elanielyn January 11 2010, 13:18:10 UTC
jfhsjklfhsl ilusm ♥
Your comments make me happy >3

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omg!!! chouhana January 9 2010, 23:47:54 UTC
pin is my otp i swear i love them sooooo much and this was the best i have ever read i love this entire story line you are truly gifted and i cant wait to read m ore of your work!!!!!1 x3

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Re: omg!!! elanielyn January 11 2010, 13:23:32 UTC
You flatter me~ Thank you a lot! ^^

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littlefairy_800 January 10 2010, 11:34:00 UTC
I'm an Akame addict, but seriously, it was beautiful, amazing, I have no proper words to express my feelings.
Thank you very much for this warming story ! They are so cute together <3 *dreaming about Pin now xD*

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elanielyn January 11 2010, 13:24:21 UTC
Some variety is always good ne~
I'm glad you like it ^w^ Thank you a lot for the pretty comment ♥

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