I need to stop choosing latin titles

Jul 08, 2011 18:40

Title: Dulce bellum inexpertis
Characters: Jin and Kame, gen
Disclaimer: They're not mine. Sad but true.
Rating: G
A/N: My awesome betas were bellemainec because she is lovely and pinkeuphoria1 because she didn't feel loved enough. And scary grapewhine.

War is sweet for those who haven't lived it. )

g: kat-tun, c: kamenashi kazuya, fandom: je, au fic, l: drabble, r: g, s: akanishi jin

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prologuesized July 9 2011, 11:08:43 UTC
... ;;----------------------; ♥♥♥

AND WHAT. WHAT DO YOU MEAN NO MORE. I don't get the situation at all, except that it's painful and it sucks and sagkha ihu for not continuing ;;_____; Evil.

...But it was beautifully written. And I enjoyed reading it, a lot. Calm but... TT^TT ihu.

What does the title mean, btw? ♥

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elanielyn July 9 2011, 12:02:04 UTC
NO MORE MEANS NO MORE. NO HAY MÁS. EI ENÄÄ that was google. I intended it to be vague and not explain anything, so unless I feel like it, it'll stay like that~

The title means "War is sweet for those who haven't lived it". Thanks for reading, mosquita.

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prologuesized July 9 2011, 12:07:07 UTC
Google worked this time then XD But yup, sometimes that's a good decision. But still ;;__________;

And oh, that's a great title then o: Like. AND I'M NOT MY CAT :(

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elanielyn July 9 2011, 12:14:34 UTC
I do have a vague idea of what could happen, but I don't want to fuck it up because I like how this one turned out.

And you are your cat. Of course you are, mosquita.

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cease11 July 9 2011, 12:30:40 UTC
Jin being embarrassed and Kame being supportive in a touchy feely way... *_____*

JOINED HANDS. I LIKE HAND HOLDING. SDFKGSDKFJGNJKDKJFGN

But...

Where is the rest? *confused*

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elanielyn July 9 2011, 12:39:50 UTC
HAND HOLDING IS SWEET.

And what do you mean the rest.

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cease11 July 9 2011, 12:45:03 UTC
HAND HOLDING IS THE BEST.

I'm expecting a Part II.

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elanielyn July 9 2011, 12:48:56 UTC
YUS.

The wait for PuppyJin will seem nothing to you if you keep waiting a Part II

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bellemainec July 9 2011, 15:24:36 UTC
I really like this one. I like the way the details slowly build up, I like the way they reach out to each other, and I love the way the world is built up around their conversation and feelings. And I just want to cuddle both of them and take care of them. I am not going to ask for a part two cos they would have to be injured and put in danger eventually and part of me just wants them to be safe snuggled up together in Jin's bunk. Of course if you write part 2 I demand you send it to me.

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starg8fan_liz July 11 2011, 05:38:21 UTC
wow. so scary/heartbreaking but sweet at the same time ^_^♥♥♥♥♥♥

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kurakura_chan July 12 2011, 00:32:01 UTC
this is sad and heartbreaking ;___;
i'm glad u dont continue this. ♥

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