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onionsoupmix

A Short Story

Oct 05, 2011 00:23

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short story, animals, tishrei, rabbis

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Re: Well done! :) onionsoupmix October 5 2011, 06:40:54 UTC

Thanks and that's a cute quote!

Just forgot one thing... anonymous October 5 2011, 12:49:10 UTC

Doesn't Sadie need to tell Clarissa that she doesn't actually know the source and reason for the mice-poking part of the custom, because she is but a hen, but she trusts that her Rooster must have learned it. Anyway, in HER coop, the long-time habits of the other chickens are the same as any requirement from the Lord of the Poultry.

JRKmommy

Re: Just forgot one thing... onionsoupmix October 5 2011, 13:13:36 UTC

Lol, we are on the same wavelength here. That thread is horrible.

Re: Just forgot one thing... anonymous October 5 2011, 16:08:06 UTC

Oh, and the farmer in Clarissa's coop never wears denim overalls, and doesn't want his son to do so either. His big fear is that the chickens will peck him to death if he does. Other farmers think that he is being ridiculous, living in fear of a bunch of chickens when he is the farmer and should take charge, but he says "I chose to live on a farm with a chicken coop, which has many advantages such as fresh eggs, and the reality is that my particular chickens will instantly start pecking any denim that they see."

JRKmommy

Re: Just forgot one thing... oneironstring October 6 2011, 04:48:48 UTC

LOL! So apropos (sp?).

murushi October 5 2011, 13:59:41 UTC

:-))))

Made my morning! :-)

onionsoupmix October 5 2011, 14:11:07 UTC

Thanks, that is nice to hear :)

That was great! anonymous October 5 2011, 16:43:52 UTC

-Fence Sitter

Re: That was great! onionsoupmix October 5 2011, 16:50:02 UTC

thx!

oneironstring October 6 2011, 04:47:51 UTC

The story is too deep for me, but I sense that it has a Yom Kippur type theme . . .

oneironstring October 7 2011, 15:55:27 UTC

Onionsoupmix, may you be blessed with increasingly abundant love and wisdom and happiness in the coming year.

onionsoupmix October 7 2011, 15:57:52 UTC

so nice to read this... you too whoever you are :)