Blind Luck 2: No Way Back, chapter 2

May 08, 2011 20:47

Blind Luck2: No Way Back

Chapter 2 )

fic, hng fic, hikaru no go, hng, "blind luck"

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lacygrey May 8 2011, 20:57:12 UTC
Although the reader can imagine Ogata cooly sitting there smoking and taking it all in, Sai can't do this without his memories. All he has are these worrying impressions gained from his working senses. Its an original approach: that he's now an uninformed observer on a universe that his past actions moulded.

This chapter filled in a lot of backstory too - its good to have a reminder of Blind Luck 1.

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onkoona May 8 2011, 22:50:35 UTC
Oh man, it was hard to describe Sai's POV! And sticking to my choice of only one POV. I've really painted myself into a corner with this one!

There'll be more backstory later, hopefully all relevant.

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lacygrey May 22 2011, 06:15:31 UTC
But that's also what makes it interesting. Its also a kind of character study of a person who doesn't fully know themselves - and who will, presumably, learn over this story. So, I suppose I'm expecting the Sai we know to gradually come into focus.

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onkoona May 22 2011, 11:09:12 UTC
Well glad you liked that; the POV & lack of visuals have had me tearing out my hair at times!

As for Sai returning to himself as was; he's living another life, one totally different from what he's lived before, will it not leave him changed?

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