Blind Luck2: No Way Back Chapter 6

May 15, 2011 17:41

Blind Luck2: No Way Back
Chapter 6 )

fic, hng fic, hikaru no go, hng, "blind luck"

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ontogenesis May 15 2011, 18:21:29 UTC
I find it amusing that Sai -- whose character design and behavior definitely bordered on gender ambiguous -- doesn't quite get transpeople or those who are straight-but-gay at heart(aka the shopkeeper). Of course, he is amnesic and blind.

Nice work demonstrating how he navigates. I feel a new respect for the visually impaired.

Poor Sai. He really is traumatized by his bad experiences, not wanting to be touched by the shopkeeper, and being afraid of the doorman. I bet Ogata is going to be *pissed.*

I wonder if Hikaru will figure out how Sai has been affected. Granted, he's a bit dense (typical boy) but Sai is definitely a lot more reserved and shy than before.

With a heavy heart Sai realized that to safe everybody's face

"safe" should be "save." And yes, this is a particularly Asian conundrum! Gotta keep up appearances.

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onkoona May 17 2011, 20:58:03 UTC
Well, in Sai's time, however effeminate, men were men and women were women. All this trans whatever business is way after his time!

I was unsure whether or not I should spend so much time on the methods Sai uses to get around. I'm glad you liked it!

You're right Hikaru is pretty dense. And yes, Sai's a lot more cautious here, hopefully that goes away once his life settles down. (And that's not yet!)

More on Sai's experiences in the next chappy

(spelling all fixed now)

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lacygrey May 22 2011, 07:58:15 UTC
I hope that once he's got his 'look' sorted out then people start treating him better. I wonder what he chose, green or purple? At least he avoided argyle, thats hard to imagine but then so is Sai in jogging bottoms!

The whole has a very definite pace, as I mentioned on the last chapter, which is very different from most stories Ive read recently.

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onkoona May 22 2011, 12:52:42 UTC
Hm, does the color choice really matter to a blind man?
I'm willing to take a poll on it:
What color would Sai choose if he could have seen the sweater: green or purple?

Again I'm glad you like it! I was a little worried that the whole shopping mall bit was a little slow, but maybe it's okay afteral...

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