[FOR BLUEDREAMING] THE LUCKY ONES

Oct 16, 2014 16:08

RECIPIENT: bluedreaming
TITLE: The Lucky Ones
RATING: R
LENGTH: 7940
WARNINGS: Implied sexual content, referenced homophobia
SUMMARY: Runaways in love
FINAL NOTES: Firstly, a thousand apologies to the onlayforlu mods for being the worst possible writer and submitting this so late ( Read more... )

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bluedreaming October 16 2014, 21:36:47 UTC
This was brilliant (ㅠ_ㅠ) ♡ *looks at you in teary-eyed wonder* the way you find out about the situation slowly as the story unfolds, parents at the table, affection for mother, last bike ride, Sehun'sAll set? and Yixing's there with the car I nod my head, small town and they're escaping First it's freedom Backseat, move to the backseat But then Lu Han's dependencies on the way You left me Yixing's suggestion about parents and phone calls that sets events in motion for everything to fall apart I nod my head, star-crossed lovers and a return to reality and the inevitable decline The only time he feels anything anymore is when he drinks Is this the end? But no there's Kris Ah, brothers and an escape/chance for Lu Han to do something this time The plane ride must have been agonizing, flying to a strange country with no mental preparation or knowledge of the language or even knowing if you'll have a place to stay But everything is okay.

And the story at the end to put it into perspective with that added note of wistfulness Poor Lu Han ( ... )

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helaas October 17 2014, 21:31:36 UTC
Oh man, I'm so glad this had a happy ending. I WAS WORRIED, especially when THEIR DREAMS WERE SHATTERED BEFORE THEY EVEN GOT TO SPEND ONE NIGHT IN THEIR SHITTY APARTMENT, but whew, at least they can be together now. ; ;

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