Stealing Heaven 2/4

Aug 26, 2010 14:49

I woke up to the sound of Jaejoong ordering a burger through the drive-thru at a fast food restaurant I knew he hated. I didn’t want to actually wake up but the smell of the burger was enough to get me alert. I extended my hand out without opening my eyes and murmured Jaejoong’s name. I could hear Jae roll his eyes at me but he gave me half the ( Read more... )

minchun, threesome, jaechun, angst, jaemin

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tvxqforeverlove August 27 2010, 12:13:54 UTC
1st? LOLOL just kidding, I'm too cool to be first this time. 8D
-tumbleweed rolls-
8D

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tvxqforeverlove August 27 2010, 21:03:19 UTC
aw damn, minnie's practically starving
but this story i sure am larving (loving in an american accent LOL)
and you know, min is just so fragile...
makes me wanna punch a crocodile
and i wanna see mean old junsu!
and if he's too much of a bastard, i'll punch him that foo'
but wait, if i hurt my husband...that's domestic violence!
...meh, so what if it'll be on my conscience?
GONNA BEAT JUNSU UP, YAY!
but first i'll rape him for a whole day.

LOLOL i'm evil. but seriously, omg. junsu is a proper bastard. how could he do that to min? THAT FUCKER. and i really hope that jaechun don't just leave min in an adoption thing. poor guy...

and it really got to me how they're life is going nowhere...

SAD STORY D;

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only4dbsk August 28 2010, 19:11:47 UTC
you're such s NUT! gahh, i havent been on the computer since FOREVER (kay, its been like 24 hours but..feels like forever)

and larving is soo not how americans pronounce loving :/

punch a crocodile? why would you do so?
but i do agree, junsu has stooped to a low :/
you can beat su after you marry him
and totally punish him for what he did to shim
but don't forget, u dont have a penis to use on his butt
ohhh, but i can lend u my strap on dildo and gag to keep his mouth shut
jaechunmin
for the win

lol!

proper bastard huh. ur speech is quite intriguing young one.

♥ x infinte so u cant beat me *glares*

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tvxqforeverlove August 28 2010, 23:01:45 UTC
LOL! your poem is epic win. I needa go buy a dildo to rape junsu with. LOL if my mum ever found a dildo in the house... -shudders- let's not go there. xD

proper bastard... XDD that's london talk, forrealz. all of me and my friends say either 'it was proper awrsome' like... yeah. and other slang we use is like 'it was well mean of her', well being a substitute for very XDD it's 'cause i type the same way I speak HAHA XD

you know, I bet people read our poems and think "wow... I wish I could be as cool as that" ;D but the fact of the matter is... THEY WILL NEVER BE AS COOL AS USSSS! NEVAAAR!

p.s. I had a dream where there was only one word in existance: jizz. so all anyone could ever say was jizz. LOL it was like "jizz jizz jizz jizz jizz?" "jizz jizz!" "jizz?" LOLOL.

♥ x infinity to the power of infinity, infinity times over. 8D BEATCHU DARLING <3

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kingdoms_lust August 27 2010, 12:28:16 UTC


Spot.. Off to read... Just got home from work & starving.. LOL!

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kingdoms_lust August 27 2010, 13:01:54 UTC

*stares at screen* I'm speechless...

I just want to grab Min to and hug him and love him and feed him.. Your story feels soo real like it's really their life it's kinda scary.. O___O" (I had noodles while reading this.. LOL!)

I feel for all 3 of them.. I can't wait to see what happens and whether or not Micky goes back to sort out Junsu... OH....

*hugs Changmin*

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only4dbsk August 28 2010, 18:57:55 UTC
hehe! i love leaving u spechless ^^

yay for noodles!!!

you know yoochun's a beast, or atleast you know that i think so *rawr* XD

♥ *joins in the hug*

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kingdoms_lust August 29 2010, 03:03:26 UTC

I bet you do.. LOL~!

yay for nice hot steamy cup of noodles... hahaha...

Is that a hint to say he will end up doing what I said he'd do.. cause he did when Jae told him about his Dad... *smirks* Yoochun is your beast.. hahahahaaa...

WOOOO~! 3 way hug is the bestest.. *kisses Min's forehead* ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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ekkusuchan August 27 2010, 14:52:05 UTC
oooh heavy and serious plot >o< poor minnie *huggles*

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only4dbsk August 28 2010, 18:58:18 UTC
*nods* quite serious, yes. ):

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be_ddelusionall August 27 2010, 14:56:16 UTC
oh my god, this fic is soooooooo angsty. I love it!
*waits for more*
and HA! I'm not the only one that says 1/3 and it ends up being 2/4 and then 3/5 and then 4/??? and then 15/15. *giggles*

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only4dbsk August 28 2010, 18:59:49 UTC
yea i know. SOOO MUCH ANGST! its sorta hard to write, i dunno how u do it :/

15? *dies* omg, lets not go there. this is going to be 4 parts...thats it....yes thats it.

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be_ddelusionall August 28 2010, 19:31:53 UTC
don't hate me was only supposed to be 4 parts
move in boyfriend was only 3
smarty smarty was only 5
naughty naughty was a one shot
maid for you was a one shot
piano lessons was 8
... ... *giggles*

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only4dbsk August 28 2010, 19:36:57 UTC
wooooowwww, arent we lucky to have you think the way you do ;D
dude, do u ever think of pdf-ing ur stories? i mean ppl would go crazayy

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reya13 August 27 2010, 15:32:19 UTC
only4dbsk August 28 2010, 19:00:47 UTC
hehe! im glad u like them. and i figure its because they're both kinda sadistic type? lol!

id like to have jaechun rob my house anyday!

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