Stolen

Sep 14, 2010 18:21

Pairing : Yoosu
Author : OnlySu
Rating : PG-13
Genre : I don't know, fluff, romance?
Summary : First time Junsu's heart got stolen
Word count : 470
un-betaed... contains of fail english and grammatical error... forgive me.. *bow*
I need to improve my english.

Well, finally...
I'm itching to write something.
College is busy...
XDDD
hope you like this shorty- ( Read more... )

yoo-su, fanfiction, oneshot

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Comments 12

awshin September 14 2010, 12:30:46 UTC
Hmm you said yoochun denied that his heart was stolen and fate threw him a reason to. reason=kitty saving scene. So does that mean his heart was stolen from the first sight? I just thought it's contradicting. Is that suppose the case? Did you write it deliberately? Thanks for the drabble!

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animeleo September 15 2010, 01:26:17 UTC
Wait, wasn't Junsu the one who denied that his heart was stolen? o.O

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awshin September 15 2010, 13:58:13 UTC
Huh? Okay so it's junsu whose heart is stolen. My question still stands. Lol. I just thought it's contradicting Junsu said yoochun's looks wasn't the reason that he fell in love with yoochun but after that, you said junsu denied that his heart was stolen that's why fate threw him a reason to. Thsi means that Junsu's heart was stolen by yoochun before the kitty-saving scene. Was your writing of the contradiction deliberate or a mistake? Just asking because if it's a mistake, then you have to be careful. =/

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animeleo September 15 2010, 14:47:06 UTC
Hmmmm the way I see it, Junsu's heart was indeed stolen before the puppy-saving scene. It's just that everything he said prior to the puppy-saving scene was a statement of denial, so it's not a contradiction since him saying Yoochun's looks wasn't the reason is just him denying it. Maybe? We should let the author answer, lol. xD

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joy_twinz September 14 2010, 13:15:47 UTC
I don’t know what it is either.. sounds like oneshot to me. Anyways, I like the whole thing. It was sweet.. I was craving for Yoosu interaction though.. ^___^

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onlysu91 September 15 2010, 19:58:32 UTC
Thanks for the comment, it is sweet, yoosu is lovw

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animeleo September 14 2010, 22:04:16 UTC
You're baaaack!!! \o/ *throws confetti*

Ok spot for mee~~~ Gotta go to my dorm's housemasters dinner soon.

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animeleo September 15 2010, 01:27:11 UTC
Waahh who's who???
The scene in the rain and the puppy is so beautifully set up though~ =)

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onlysu91 September 15 2010, 20:01:38 UTC
I'm back.... I miss you, i miss live journal, i miss writing, i miss yoosu, i miss comments... Sorry for the babbling love., but i need to let it out. College is fun though, but i miss my quiet day, just me, my macbook, and my imagination of yoosu sweet scene.
Again, sorry for the nonsense, thq for the sweet comment. Love u... XD

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animeleo September 15 2010, 23:25:44 UTC
Awwww I've missed you tooooo!!! I've missed talking to you and reading your yoosuuuu. I kept wondering where you were, lol. I'm glad you're enjoying college though! ^^ Hwaiting~

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