Flowery Promise Ch7

Aug 03, 2010 13:17


Pairing : Yoochun and Junsu
Author : OnlySu
Rating : R
Genre : AU, angst, romance
Summary : Junsu's life turned upside down when his mother had stomach cancer and when a new boy entered his school. His rude seat mate was cold and distant to everyone. He found a job to support his mother's treatment with working in a club and found his cold seat mate ( Read more... )

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zoeybunnygals August 3 2010, 07:44:55 UTC
so chunnie finally told su huh? oh how i wish junsu could remember everything

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onlysu91 August 3 2010, 07:56:56 UTC
yes, finally he told him... Yay for Yoosu for the future... XDD

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joy_twinz August 3 2010, 09:38:44 UTC
I pity Su.. He's really in pain coz of those problems but he needs to be strong, ne? and oh, does he need to get his head bump on a hard wall before he could remember Chun??xD I hope he remembers Yoochun soon..
thanks for the update! ^_^

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onlysu91 August 3 2010, 12:42:57 UTC
yessss,,,,,, Poor susu, be strong... no, i won't susu head at the wall, I'll get kill by all Susu fans..
Nah, thanks for commentng here.. XD

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kamowifey August 3 2010, 10:19:44 UTC
Finally,, one step close 2 reveal the past, and loveydovey yoosu moment right???! *ihope* ;}

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onlysu91 August 3 2010, 12:45:12 UTC
Yes, and yeeeeaaaaahhhh.. for Yoosu lovey dovey action

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missyoosu August 3 2010, 17:36:47 UTC
I think this chapter was your longest one yet! Lots of things happened, but most importantly, Yoochun told Su how they knew each other. I really like how you wrote how Junsu's memories were returning little by little as Chun walked away by using the slashes (//). I think I'll use that in one of my fics, too, if you don't mind!!

Are you sure you haven't completed the fic already? B/C it seems to flow nicely, especially each childhood memory at the end of the chapter. They seem to match each chapter really well and to be moving at the right pace as the rest of the story. Great job!

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onlysu91 August 4 2010, 08:49:32 UTC
Wow, i don't realize that it is the longest chapter... yes, chun finally told su. XD
thank you for liking it. you can use it of course, it's universal character... and universal way of writing something.. XD
*hugs you*
thank you, your comment relieved my heart, i had so many doubt in writing this fic.

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sheilapiglet August 3 2010, 19:47:28 UTC
I'm glad that JS is starting to remember...I really hope he tells YC about his memory loss...that way, YC will understand why he can't remember the past.

JS has money now from working at pulstilla right?...or perhaps he can ask for advance payement?....I wonder if YC will help him out since he knows JS's mom's illness now....but how is JS going to explain where he got the money from to his family?

anyways, looking forward to your next update...this chapter wasn't boring=)

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onlysu91 August 4 2010, 08:54:30 UTC
yeeeessss... We shall hope the best for Yoosu....!!!!

I think he hasn't have his payment... It's still in Jaejoong. He must ask him for get it before the payment time. naaahhh,, i'm confused, as same as you... I don't know how to write the scene of him giving the money to his dad..... will think about it...

thankyou, another reliving comment for me.... will update asap.... <3

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