Count to Three 1/3

Aug 05, 2010 15:55



You waited there for someone that wasn’t there, humming together with the music box about magical love story and dreamy happy ending. The clock sounded so loud at your ears.

3 o’clock in the morning, and yet the bed beside was still empty. Like your heart… it was empty.

You heard the sound of footsteps at the corridor, and your eyes ( Read more... )

yoo-su, fanfiction, short series

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sol_valerie August 5 2010, 22:36:13 UTC
i'm really glad this wasn't just a oneshot. my heart would break if it ends just like that.

i'm curious about yoochun's behaviour. is he having a split personalty disorder? or maybe, he tends to become a different person when he's drunk? lol, you got me interested in this. i'll wait for the answers in your next chapter, i guess :D

looking forward to your next update~

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onlysu91 August 6 2010, 03:12:24 UTC
hahha, i thought to make this oneshot.... i wrote it because i'm just bored. hoho.. But, my happy ending sense kicked me in my butt and shouted "Don't you dare to make susu suffering and end the fic like this"
So... here we are,, three short shot.
Hope you will like the next one

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baboboy August 5 2010, 23:59:56 UTC
wow....just wow

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tami_ko August 6 2010, 00:53:54 UTC
"You only had one heart.

You gave it to him, but he destroyed it."

OMG TT
How sad was that!

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baboboy August 6 2010, 01:14:45 UTC
IKR!!!!!!

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onlysu91 August 6 2010, 03:12:52 UTC
IA...!!!. *crying*
Thank you for reading this...

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sheilapiglet August 6 2010, 05:42:27 UTC
I really wonder how YC can be so bad at night, but so good in the day....what made YC be this way?...as of now, I can't think of a way for this fic to have a happy ending...what can YC do to deserve JS's love again?...after everything he did to him, can they really move on and forgive/forget? looking forward to what you have in store for us...update soon=)

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onlysu91 August 6 2010, 10:37:25 UTC
he is defferent when he's drunk... hhohoo...
will update it soon...
Hope you'll like it. Thw for comment. XD

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awshin August 6 2010, 14:26:18 UTC
Awww. Yoochun better reflect on his behaviour, get junsu back and treasure him like a princess prince! Thanks for wriitng this onlysu!

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onlysu91 August 6 2010, 14:39:28 UTC
wow, it's you... my fave author.. asdfdsfkjjjjlkdjdd.
he'll do it... Or i will personally snatch susu from him...
hahaha
thank you for reading and commenting here.. XDD

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bitingsu August 8 2010, 07:59:30 UTC
This was terribly sad ;__; (Damn Yoochun, I'm glad Su left.)
but I love it! I love the pain mixed so well with love and... it's strong.
Awesome. ♡

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onlysu91 August 8 2010, 08:02:10 UTC
thank you...
Susu deserves better treatment... Don't you agree...?
Glad you love it...
XD
thq for commenting..

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