Cherry Blossom Story (When love becomes so painful) - Part 2

[onlysu91]

Pairing : Yoosu, Minsu
Author : OnlySu
Rating : R
Genre : Angst, Romance
Summary : The line between love and hate is thin
Word count : 2452
Warning : Unbeta-ed... contains of fail english and grammatical error... forgive me.. *bow*
I need to improve my english.
This the last part...

Part 1 is here (Clickie)

Comments

[zoeybunnygals]

T_T.....poor junsuie he really does love chunnie, changmin how dare you???!!!

this is beautiful

[onlysu91]

Thank you baby...
Changmin finally get what he deserved in the end... DDX
Thanks for commenting... XDDDD

[jihae_shii]

i knew it!!! D: D: D: but i hoped i was wrong SUSUUUUU TT.TT

[onlysu91]

dun dun dun, you have sixth sense... XDDDD lol... XD
jk bb...
Thank you for reading and commenting.. XD

[drtrypanophobic]

ive always had a certain partiality to ancient korean or anything periodical. and its so rare to read one so im happy to stumble upon this :DD and i had a niggling feeling that it was all for revenge and i know that changmin deserved it (he killed yoochun D:<) but i cant help feeling sorry for him. because he did love junsu with all his heart and love makes you do crazy things.

i'm sure if you get a beta this would be much better than it already is, so keep writing, we need more yoosu writers :DDD

[onlysu91]

English is hard.... I'll try to find one... I'm sorry... ;_;
Yes, Poor Changmin-ie... When i write this, i feel the same thing.
thank you for commenting here bb... XD

[drtrypanophobic]

no, its ok bb. practice makes perfect (even i need a beta with all the mistakes i make D:)

[onlysu91]

*sigh...
will try harder for the sake of Yoosu tribe... aye aye sir...

[sheilapiglet]

that was beautifully tragic....but being the sadistic one, I was happy that Yoosu could finally be together again...I'm glad that JS got his revenge and that CM will be full of regret for the rest of his life..haha, I know I'm evil=P

anyways, this was really nicely written and touched my heart...am looking forward to your future work=)

[onlysu91]

you... *gasp* are my favorite sadistic person now... ^O^
sooo thank you for your lovely evil comment... XD
will try harder.. thank you for commenting and reading this fic...
T^T
*I'm touched*

[missyoosu]

I can't help but feel bad for Min. He loved Su so much. How is he going to live now that his wife killed himself? So sad. T___T

I think your writing is improving nicely. You're better at descriptive writing than I am!

[onlysu91]

Yes, but he deserved what he got for killing Yoochun... T^T
thank you from your compliment babe... You always make me feel better... XDDD
you have your own amazing way to write... I have seen your stories.. XDDD
Thank you for commenting.. XDD <3